for Maybe one day11/7/2005 c1 
57empathic life
The emotion is amazing in this. Absolutely mind-shattering. I feel sorry for you, love. I can sympathize with the not-being-able-to-express-love-in-a-poem syndrome. Excellent. The meter was a little iffy in some spots, for a little constructive criticism, but otherwise, it was amazing. Great word choice.
57empathic lifeThe emotion is amazing in this. Absolutely mind-shattering. I feel sorry for you, love. I can sympathize with the not-being-able-to-express-love-in-a-poem syndrome. Excellent. The meter was a little iffy in some spots, for a little constructive criticism, but otherwise, it was amazing. Great word choice.