for Heartbroken Girl7/13/2011 c1 lymli
the ending is filled with sadness n hate, but I think the starting was cute like every relation from first :)
the ending is filled with sadness n hate, but I think the starting was cute like every relation from first :)
1/21/2011 c1 
10Maddiecat
this is so beautiful, makes me remember how i felt when my boyfriend and i had a nasty break up. so awesome!
10Maddiecatthis is so beautiful, makes me remember how i felt when my boyfriend and i had a nasty break up. so awesome!
11/10/2005 c1 112PerpetualBliss44
very good, very convincing. it kind of reads like it could be a song. i liked the last part best, that he'd beg her to come back, that he'd miss her. slightly intimidating. nice job
112PerpetualBliss44very good, very convincing. it kind of reads like it could be a song. i liked the last part best, that he'd beg her to come back, that he'd miss her. slightly intimidating. nice job
11/8/2005 c1 9Cloudstalker
this poem is really cool and good, you should totally read my story sometime
9Cloudstalkerthis poem is really cool and good, you should totally read my story sometime
11/8/2005 c1 8CraigAPrice
wow i realy like this poem. This is exactly how I feel of my ex.. she totally will be sorry one day (:, well keep up the good writing (:
8CraigAPricewow i realy like this poem. This is exactly how I feel of my ex.. she totally will be sorry one day (:, well keep up the good writing (:
11/8/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I loved how you put the stages of this relationship in this; that love in the beggining, the obsession for the middle and then the heartbreak and yearning for the end. Its the everyday cycle of the relatioship. Nice work.
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietI loved how you put the stages of this relationship in this; that love in the beggining, the obsession for the middle and then the heartbreak and yearning for the end. Its the everyday cycle of the relatioship. Nice work.
Juliet.