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7/13/2011 c1 lymli
the ending is filled with sadness n hate, but I think the starting was cute like every relation from first :)
1/21/2011 c1 10Maddiecat
this is so beautiful, makes me remember how i felt when my boyfriend and i had a nasty break up. so awesome!
8/28/2006 c1 4pixiepoptartz
I can really relate to this. : ) Good job
1/28/2006 c1 9SavannahX
Aw. That's so sweet!
11/10/2005 c1 112PerpetualBliss44
very good, very convincing. it kind of reads like it could be a song. i liked the last part best, that he'd beg her to come back, that he'd miss her. slightly intimidating. nice job
11/8/2005 c1 9Cloudstalker
this poem is really cool and good, you should totally read my story sometime
11/8/2005 c1 8CraigAPrice
wow i realy like this poem. This is exactly how I feel of my ex.. she totally will be sorry one day (:, well keep up the good writing (:
11/8/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I loved how you put the stages of this relationship in this; that love in the beggining, the obsession for the middle and then the heartbreak and yearning for the end. Its the everyday cycle of the relatioship. Nice work.


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