for Unfiltered11/9/2005 c1 
155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
Once again, I loved how you used a unique format. Great work!
155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.XOnce again, I loved how you used a unique format. Great work!
11/8/2005 c1 simpletonsgrin
I think you went a bit overboard with alle the underlining and italiscizing etc etc etc. Other than that, it was pretty good.
Everything in moderation, you know? When you embellish it as much as you have, the frills sort of overshadow the real concept and body.
Keep at it- your work is worth it.
-simpleton
I think you went a bit overboard with alle the underlining and italiscizing etc etc etc. Other than that, it was pretty good.
Everything in moderation, you know? When you embellish it as much as you have, the frills sort of overshadow the real concept and body.
Keep at it- your work is worth it.
-simpleton
11/8/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
the format was quite unique~ some very good usage of words~ good job
keep writing!
132mizu no kokorothe format was quite unique~ some very good usage of words~ good job
keep writing!