
11/13/2005 c1
23Damien Vlashtov
Good piece. I like how you pace it, with the "all.tied.up" parts. Quite creative, madame. Keep writing.

Good piece. I like how you pace it, with the "all.tied.up" parts. Quite creative, madame. Keep writing.
11/9/2005 c1
155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
The imagery is so vivid, wonderful work! I really like this, kind of makes you think. Awesomeness.

The imagery is so vivid, wonderful work! I really like this, kind of makes you think. Awesomeness.