
11/9/2005 c1
34Smoky Bear
i've been that little girl too... (thing's are different now, one day they will be for you too...)
you've always got friends here on fictionpress... people to share your words and pain...
this is well structured and well written, i like the way it unwinds at the end, very desolate.

i've been that little girl too... (thing's are different now, one day they will be for you too...)
you've always got friends here on fictionpress... people to share your words and pain...
this is well structured and well written, i like the way it unwinds at the end, very desolate.
11/9/2005 c1
17sunday night sky
aww, yeah, I've been through that. and some of my friends are now so I sympathise. the poem is well expressed, and very honest.
if u ever need to talk, u can always email me.

aww, yeah, I've been through that. and some of my friends are now so I sympathise. the poem is well expressed, and very honest.
if u ever need to talk, u can always email me.