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12/4/2013 c26 SeriousAliysa
One of my favourites stories on here just reread it and have reviewed before bit cannot remembed what i say and a perfect song for the ending would be u.n.i by ed sheeran btw
11/18/2013 c7 AliCat
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH TRAILA HAPPENED ASDFGHJKL YAYAYAYAYAY! Thank u sooo much aaah xxx
11/18/2013 c5 AliCat
Ryan's description of the slut was so funny ROFL!
11/18/2013 c2 AliCat
Yes I officially love it 3 xxx
11/18/2013 c1 AliCat
Yep, the upperclassmen sound like some peeps I know. But OMG I already love Trent and Laila I SHIP TRAILA! Great story so far tho, 3 it xx!
9/21/2013 c26 Guest
It was very amazing love story .i dont know i am going to forget it for ages .plese comlete this story.
9/9/2013 c9 Sahara
I really love this chapter. And I wanted to know if it was okay with you it I took a scene in this chapter. That's up to you tho.
9/5/2013 c15 Sahara
I really love this chapter and Idk if this is okay but can I use a scene for a story of mine? I hshs needed permission first. I'm totally okay if you say no. But don't worry if you do say yes I would love to give you credit!
7/1/2013 c9 1leavesfallingup
Did he talk to her friends to find out her likes and dislikes or did he plan the date out all on his own?
7/1/2013 c7 leavesfallingup
Trent's home life doesn't seem too happy. Considering his little sister's attitude toward their parents, it makes me wonder what is happening. The fact that they live in the same neighborhood as the very wealthy Ryan, it suggests that his parents are the hard-driving climber types. Am I right?
7/1/2013 c6 leavesfallingup
And now the claws will start to come out. It should be interesting.
7/1/2013 c5 leavesfallingup
Well, at least that solves the problem of Mitchell. He can't be too interested if he's dating someone else. Then again, it is high school.
7/1/2013 c3 leavesfallingup
Sometimes clichés are... reliable, even comfortable. After all, if something is a cliché, that implies that it happens so often that is becomes predictable, right?
7/1/2013 c2 leavesfallingup
From Delia's reaction, she doesn't seem too happy with her parents. They didn't even make it onto her "favorites" drawing. Little children are remarkably honest with their emotions, but they still tend to see their parents in the best light... which makes me wonder about the situation.

Curioser and curioser.
7/1/2013 c1 leavesfallingup
Laila seems like a very good person. Unfortunately, high schoolers aren't known to flock around "good" and "nice" students. Those qualities don't stand out as desirable until after the other types of people knock a person around for a few years.

I look forward to reading this story.
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