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11/11/2005 c1 19Kat-Renee Kittel
I love the line about the rocks being outlined by white crayon-very vivid. My mind just picked up on that and I could easily see the beach.

This is a terrific piece. I can imagine myself there as the girl wondering how the boy actually feels about her.
11/11/2005 c1 8BJ Worth
I don't even know how you'd classify this, but whatever it is, it's good. Great description.
11/11/2005 c1 37O-o The Orange Moose o-O
I love this... it's so serene and peaceful, and very much captures the feeling of love... How you don't care about anything except for them... Lovely job ^^

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