10/19/2008 c1 Ethan the stargazer
Interesting.

Death is a mysterious thing.Your vagueness about the form of death makes it all the more appealing, as noone knows why or how they mmay die until they actually do. Whether they admit it or not, all people wonder how it feels to die.

9/10

1/6/2006 c1 64Arwen Starfire
It hits you right there, if you know what I mean...the feeling of burning...very interesting and unique concepts...hi-five to you for taking on one of the most written about poetry subjects, death, and coming up with your own point of view.

p.s. thnx for reviewing my story.

11/12/2005 c1 9cecyouyed
that is really deep keep it up!

11/11/2005 c1 2TestVirus101
That was very good and I felt it captured war quite well.