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11/11/2005 c1 104FunkyFlower
love the line 'let us rule in metal towers'...genius. the rhyming is a little too forced in this... i would advise u 2 loosen it up a little so it flows more naturally. for sum reason, this reminds me of 'macbeth' by william shakespeare (he's an ancient english poet). great imagery and sum good lines but work on it a little bit, great, ~mez~

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