
10/19/2006 c1
83the-foresight
I liked it, the shortness made it brief and cool.You didn;t drag it out and I thought that was well done. I a great last line as well.

I liked it, the shortness made it brief and cool.You didn;t drag it out and I thought that was well done. I a great last line as well.
11/12/2005 c1
155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
Interesting... what you live for? Well, nicely written, a very vivid image. Cool.

Interesting... what you live for? Well, nicely written, a very vivid image. Cool.
11/11/2005 c1 Madame Noir
that last line, just made it. as i was reading the poem i kept feeling like it was incomplete but the last line just brings it together.
that last line, just made it. as i was reading the poem i kept feeling like it was incomplete but the last line just brings it together.
11/11/2005 c1
30tastes like love
Haha...Makes me think of well...ME! Or at least how I used to be, haven't stolen in like a year. Haha.

Haha...Makes me think of well...ME! Or at least how I used to be, haven't stolen in like a year. Haha.