
6/23/2018 c20 Guest
Great story! Definitely among my top favourites. Thank you for sharing it with us :)
Great story! Definitely among my top favourites. Thank you for sharing it with us :)
9/11/2015 c20 idorenyin udoh
to w.t.f: u don't actually sound like a fan of books so why not find some M rated story or even watch a porn..pervert!.
to w.t.f: u don't actually sound like a fan of books so why not find some M rated story or even watch a porn..pervert!.
9/11/2015 c20 idorenyin Udoh
great sense of humour...great story!
great sense of humour...great story!
1/4/2014 c4 w.t.f
At first I thought you were using reverse psychology to make us read your story, but then I realised that your story does actually suck. It's terrible. (No offence meant) I mean seriously if this is what FictionPress readers like, then I wonder what they'd do when they come across a story that is actually good-say that its bad?-_-
At first I thought you were using reverse psychology to make us read your story, but then I realised that your story does actually suck. It's terrible. (No offence meant) I mean seriously if this is what FictionPress readers like, then I wonder what they'd do when they come across a story that is actually good-say that its bad?-_-
1/4/2014 c4 W.T.F
At first I thought you were using reverse psychology to make us read your story, but then I realised that your story does actually suck. It's terrible. (No offence meant) I mean seriously if this is what FictionPress readers like, then I wonder what they'd do when they come across a story that is actually good-say that its bad?
At first I thought you were using reverse psychology to make us read your story, but then I realised that your story does actually suck. It's terrible. (No offence meant) I mean seriously if this is what FictionPress readers like, then I wonder what they'd do when they come across a story that is actually good-say that its bad?
5/25/2012 c20 Littlemslulu
Somehow this story feels a little bit too cliche. But i love it! The story is light and funny. I wish you would go deeper with each of the character. Keep writing good stories! :)
Somehow this story feels a little bit too cliche. But i love it! The story is light and funny. I wish you would go deeper with each of the character. Keep writing good stories! :)
8/1/2011 c1 where the sequel at
Wasn't there a sequel to this? From what I remember, it was written better and I enjoyed it more.
Wasn't there a sequel to this? From what I remember, it was written better and I enjoyed it more.
7/20/2011 c1 Elizabeth92
I Love Your Story I Just Seen You Mite Delect It
Please Please Dont If It Was A Book In The Shops I Would So Buy It
Your A Good Write Dont Think Your Not
Please Write More Storys :)
I Love Your Story I Just Seen You Mite Delect It
Please Please Dont If It Was A Book In The Shops I Would So Buy It
Your A Good Write Dont Think Your Not
Please Write More Storys :)
5/1/2011 c20 Lifes.Little.Secrets
I loved it! I was a little worried when I read the summary, but wow it was so good!
I loved it! I was a little worried when I read the summary, but wow it was so good!