6/24/2006 c2 5Skeptic-Critic
Fire escape? I must admit...That's a new one...I mean I've read elavators, and stair wells, and bridges, and rooms, and a walk in freezer...But you're the first I've read who got them stuck on a fire escape...I like the originality...And the fact that there isn't a chance they'll suffocate...
Fire escape? I must admit...That's a new one...I mean I've read elavators, and stair wells, and bridges, and rooms, and a walk in freezer...But you're the first I've read who got them stuck on a fire escape...I like the originality...And the fact that there isn't a chance they'll suffocate...
6/24/2006 c1 Skeptic-Critic
Saw that one coming...The minute you said the bit about the enemies, I knew who her roommate was...I mean, it's just not interesting reading about someone who falls in love with her roommate and they've gotten along since the beginning...It's boring...I mean, even if we know what'll happen in the end, it's still more interesting than that...Just is...
Also, I have another of your stories on my "to read" list...Which is rather long since it's summer, so expect reviews from me over there too...Eventually...
Saw that one coming...The minute you said the bit about the enemies, I knew who her roommate was...I mean, it's just not interesting reading about someone who falls in love with her roommate and they've gotten along since the beginning...It's boring...I mean, even if we know what'll happen in the end, it's still more interesting than that...Just is...
Also, I have another of your stories on my "to read" list...Which is rather long since it's summer, so expect reviews from me over there too...Eventually...
4/17/2006 c20 6Silver-Dragon5
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while but good job. I like it very much. Congrats on finishing. *cheers*
~Silver
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while but good job. I like it very much. Congrats on finishing. *cheers*
~Silver
4/4/2006 c20 Athena Wind
Extremely good story, and the end is satisfying. Keep up the good work!
Extremely good story, and the end is satisfying. Keep up the good work!
4/2/2006 c20 rae
i love this. it was perfect.
i love this. it was perfect.
4/2/2006 c7 raelia
this is super good so far, but for some reason chapter six doesn't load, so i don't really know what happened with vin and all that. it's probably just my computer or the internet, but could you please check it out because i would really love to read that chapter. thanks so much.
this is super good so far, but for some reason chapter six doesn't load, so i don't really know what happened with vin and all that. it's probably just my computer or the internet, but could you please check it out because i would really love to read that chapter. thanks so much.
3/25/2006 c20 aMy
OMG i started and ended this tory 2day it was so good. i luved the ending even thought it was short. u should totally do a sequel i would most def read it
OMG i started and ended this tory 2day it was so good. i luved the ending even thought it was short. u should totally do a sequel i would most def read it
3/24/2006 c20 MonkeyMohawk1
yippy its finished...that was greeaatt!..oh god i sound like fuckin tony the tiger...ignore that well..good story..bye bye now..
yippy its finished...that was greeaatt!..oh god i sound like fuckin tony the tiger...ignore that well..good story..bye bye now..
3/24/2006 c20 8Out-Spoken-Runaway
That's a sweet epilogue. xD
One question: Do they get married in the end (Nick and Gracie)?
XxFallingxX
That's a sweet epilogue. xD
One question: Do they get married in the end (Nick and Gracie)?
XxFallingxX
3/23/2006 c20 6Death by Dangerous Driving
AW! The ending was GREAT! DOn't worry about it being too short.
I thought it was going to be the cliche six months later when Nick pops the question.
But no.
It was better!
Go you!
Good luck with your next story!
Sakina :D
AW! The ending was GREAT! DOn't worry about it being too short.
I thought it was going to be the cliche six months later when Nick pops the question.
But no.
It was better!
Go you!
Good luck with your next story!
Sakina :D
3/23/2006 c20 17Lady of romance world88
Wow! Lily and Frankie now together. How wonderful that Nick and Gracie end up together. How sweetly cute couples they are. I cant wait for your next story.
Wow! Lily and Frankie now together. How wonderful that Nick and Gracie end up together. How sweetly cute couples they are. I cant wait for your next story.
3/23/2006 c20 1ani18
I really love this story. This epilogue is a nice way to end it. I'm sad although all great things must come to an end.
I really love this story. This epilogue is a nice way to end it. I'm sad although all great things must come to an end.
3/23/2006 c20 dOrKy-GuRl03
hey gurl..aww can't believe that its the ends already...so loving it...well anyways going to head out then...so peace out gurl..bye-bye then..:D...
hey gurl..aww can't believe that its the ends already...so loving it...well anyways going to head out then...so peace out gurl..bye-bye then..:D...