for Balcony11/12/2005 c1 
147hiding behind amber eyes
i like the part "my stomach dropped..." that was good. i like this, very though its dark. good job
147hiding behind amber eyesi like the part "my stomach dropped..." that was good. i like this, very though its dark. good job
11/11/2005 c1 41T. Rowland
very powerful...you captured heaps of emotion in a small space. well done.
41T. Rowlandvery powerful...you captured heaps of emotion in a small space. well done.
11/11/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I like how you keep coming back to the point, of rewriting it and then writting it again; the memory of it. I really enjoyed it.
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietI like how you keep coming back to the point, of rewriting it and then writting it again; the memory of it. I really enjoyed it.
Juliet.