for Black Rain12/8/2005 c1 
104FunkyFlower
sad poem and extremely touching. i can empathise and i feel sorry for the person. great ending tho. very blunt and final. awesome,
~mez~
104FunkyFlowersad poem and extremely touching. i can empathise and i feel sorry for the person. great ending tho. very blunt and final. awesome,
~mez~
11/13/2005 c1 109mistressKC
It's a very good poem, very honest. However there's a sense of redundancy in the lines so you may have to reword some lines. And you mentined the world 'bitch' so this should have either a M rating or a T rating with a warning for some mild profanity.
109mistressKCIt's a very good poem, very honest. However there's a sense of redundancy in the lines so you may have to reword some lines. And you mentined the world 'bitch' so this should have either a M rating or a T rating with a warning for some mild profanity.