for Constant Reminder11/14/2005 c1 Isi Franssoiz Elyan
It's heart stopping. how can a love that beautiful be broken so? i think the P.S. is...¦~¦. it's so sad, but so pretty in the beginning, the lines just flow at the start of your poem, and the heaven and earth comparison(s) is a brilliant addition. the last line is one of the best. it has it's own rhythm.
luv Ife
It's heart stopping. how can a love that beautiful be broken so? i think the P.S. is...¦~¦. it's so sad, but so pretty in the beginning, the lines just flow at the start of your poem, and the heaven and earth comparison(s) is a brilliant addition. the last line is one of the best. it has it's own rhythm.
luv Ife