for A Melting Candle Of Humility8/14/2006 c1 
836CRaZy-OdIN
wow, so personal and so touching. Some amazing emotive language here and use of imagery. this is going on my favs. 'You are like a candle that mets as it grows' amazing, a sense of love and desperation and loss for something you havent even lost yet. I love it, even if it is a bit on the sad side, keep it up.
836CRaZy-OdINwow, so personal and so touching. Some amazing emotive language here and use of imagery. this is going on my favs. 'You are like a candle that mets as it grows' amazing, a sense of love and desperation and loss for something you havent even lost yet. I love it, even if it is a bit on the sad side, keep it up.
12/12/2005 c1 100Gabriel Lyman
I've felt that way about a girl before, twas insane how i really loved her and then was let down, but It seems you know that feeling too... good work.
100Gabriel LymanI've felt that way about a girl before, twas insane how i really loved her and then was let down, but It seems you know that feeling too... good work.
11/17/2005 c1 168SeaVoi
The "My ..." parts are great they really show a struggle in the relationship! Very nice.
168SeaVoiThe "My ..." parts are great they really show a struggle in the relationship! Very nice.
11/14/2005 c1 51Arichos
Metaphorical in depth give a great feeling to the reader. Line after line is beautifully written
51ArichosMetaphorical in depth give a great feeling to the reader. Line after line is beautifully written
11/13/2005 c1 270queenvixta
This is so deep and beautiful. A very moving piece and the emotions are really clear. Well done with this. QueenVixta
270queenvixtaThis is so deep and beautiful. A very moving piece and the emotions are really clear. Well done with this. QueenVixta
11/12/2005 c1 7Sierra Valentine
That was so sweet! -steals- Nah, just joking, but I really loved it..
7Sierra ValentineThat was so sweet! -steals- Nah, just joking, but I really loved it..