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8/14/2006 c1 836CRaZy-OdIN
wow, so personal and so touching. Some amazing emotive language here and use of imagery. this is going on my favs. 'You are like a candle that mets as it grows' amazing, a sense of love and desperation and loss for something you havent even lost yet. I love it, even if it is a bit on the sad side, keep it up.
12/12/2005 c1 100Gabriel Lyman
I've felt that way about a girl before, twas insane how i really loved her and then was let down, but It seems you know that feeling too... good work.
11/17/2005 c1 168SeaVoi
The "My ..." parts are great they really show a struggle in the relationship! Very nice.
11/14/2005 c1 51Arichos
Metaphorical in depth give a great feeling to the reader. Line after line is beautifully written
11/13/2005 c1 270queenvixta
This is so deep and beautiful. A very moving piece and the emotions are really clear. Well done with this. QueenVixta
11/12/2005 c1 65Aquafied
interesting.that one true thing
11/12/2005 c1 7Sierra Valentine
That was so sweet! -steals- Nah, just joking, but I really loved it..
11/12/2005 c1 112PerpetualBliss44
that is absolutely ... beautiful.
11/12/2005 c1 105eraced
nice work. keep writing.

thank you for the review. i'm caimer now, but still think it's my fault. i don't no if he's in hospital or not, but will try and talk to him tomorow.i dunno if he's talking to me. i'm gonna try and help again thank you.

decaying roses.~erAced~

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