for Long Blonde Hair12/24/2006 c1 
1Eccentric
That was good! Very true. One suggestion. I would recommended adding a comma in the last line. So, instead of:
Like me to cry.
It would be:
Like me, to cry.
Proper grammar and all.. =)
I really liked this!
-Jackie
1EccentricThat was good! Very true. One suggestion. I would recommended adding a comma in the last line. So, instead of:
Like me to cry.
It would be:
Like me, to cry.
Proper grammar and all.. =)
I really liked this!
-Jackie
12/11/2005 c1 6Eleytheria
Wow, great poem! ^-^ I like the title a lot... maybe cause I have long blonde hair, but you are a really good with poetry.
6EleytheriaWow, great poem! ^-^ I like the title a lot... maybe cause I have long blonde hair, but you are a really good with poetry.
11/21/2005 c1 ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1
That was really good and I liked it that it wasn't so bitter but accepting the consequences and knowing what will happen.
That was really good and I liked it that it wasn't so bitter but accepting the consequences and knowing what will happen.