for A Burning Poppy11/22/2005 c1 
64Sykes
The metaphor in your poem is singularly powerful and calls upon imagery that is immediate and poignant. All in all, I must say this is a fantastic poem that I wish I had discovered sooner. Keep up the good work.
64SykesThe metaphor in your poem is singularly powerful and calls upon imagery that is immediate and poignant. All in all, I must say this is a fantastic poem that I wish I had discovered sooner. Keep up the good work.
11/18/2005 c1 46hate-fueled
Oh my god! that was such a great poem! Its short and strong and puts images in my head straight away. i wish my war poem was that good!
46hate-fueledOh my god! that was such a great poem! Its short and strong and puts images in my head straight away. i wish my war poem was that good!
11/14/2005 c1 131Beauty From Pain
Wow, that was a great poem. You're awesome with metaphors. I don't know if I could do that. Keep writing because you have such a great talent! Oh thank you so much for reviewing "What Evil Is." I just needed to get some feelings out after she died. I'm really happy you reviewed, thanks again :) and PS keep writing! :-D
131Beauty From PainWow, that was a great poem. You're awesome with metaphors. I don't know if I could do that. Keep writing because you have such a great talent! Oh thank you so much for reviewing "What Evil Is." I just needed to get some feelings out after she died. I'm really happy you reviewed, thanks again :) and PS keep writing! :-D
11/14/2005 c1 4Veronica-D
good description of the word red... and also Poppy's and the different representations... this is good. Also good on the memories many things will triger memories.. smells, odd things like poppy's in a war. those things. Very good ^^ I will read you story later when I have time.
4Veronica-Dgood description of the word red... and also Poppy's and the different representations... this is good. Also good on the memories many things will triger memories.. smells, odd things like poppy's in a war. those things. Very good ^^ I will read you story later when I have time.
11/14/2005 c1 7midnightdream-5
hey i like ur use of imajery in this poem, especially the idea of the poppy's colour, and what it might sybolise. - oh god ive been payin 2 much attention in eng lit! anyway i enjoyed this poem and i think you deal with the issue well.katx
7midnightdream-5hey i like ur use of imajery in this poem, especially the idea of the poppy's colour, and what it might sybolise. - oh god ive been payin 2 much attention in eng lit! anyway i enjoyed this poem and i think you deal with the issue well.katx
11/13/2005 c1 Elizabeth Bilberry
A flower, so simple and bautiful, can represent so much pain. It's ironic, eh?
EB
A flower, so simple and bautiful, can represent so much pain. It's ironic, eh?
EB