for Madman Blue5/20/2006 c1 
9Aluminum Tinkerbell
Wow. You have a mastary of human emotions. I really like this, and I am most certainaly going to keep reading.
Amazing job.
9Aluminum TinkerbellWow. You have a mastary of human emotions. I really like this, and I am most certainaly going to keep reading.
Amazing job.
11/13/2005 c1 15BlackDreamLily
Wow. I'm glad you put this back up- it's just out-right drowned in raw, human emotion. I'm thinking The Catcher in the Rye type of emotion. Heavy stuff. Brilliantly written too. You have a pure mastery of the English language that just doesn't come around too often anymore. "Playing bastardized arcade games all redone with shiny new effects meant to amuse the iPod generation, and thinking about the meaning of it all." Such prominant, creative language! You really get inside your character's head. Is it cozy in there? (Kidding!) Have you considered publishing this when it's finished?
15BlackDreamLilyWow. I'm glad you put this back up- it's just out-right drowned in raw, human emotion. I'm thinking The Catcher in the Rye type of emotion. Heavy stuff. Brilliantly written too. You have a pure mastery of the English language that just doesn't come around too often anymore. "Playing bastardized arcade games all redone with shiny new effects meant to amuse the iPod generation, and thinking about the meaning of it all." Such prominant, creative language! You really get inside your character's head. Is it cozy in there? (Kidding!) Have you considered publishing this when it's finished?