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5/29/2008 c13 1xxcanyouseemexx
omg this is such a good story!

its so sad

but amazingly written!

i love it :D

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12/6/2005 c1 9butterfly heaven
I like it continue. I enjoy stories like this. I write om fanfiction.net.
11/29/2005 c13 Aldo
I would have read & reviewed this sooner but I don't remember fictionpress sending me an Author Alert email...weird.

Anyway, awesome chapter! It's so heartbreaking that when Erim finally opened up to someone, that someone pushed her away to remain professional and such. But I love this story, and now I shall read the sequel. Yay!
11/23/2005 c13 13angel4evaxxxxx
aww such a sad but brilliant story, I loved it all the way
11/21/2005 c12 Aldo
Intense. I must find out what happens next! I'm looking forward to the next update.
11/21/2005 c11 angel4evaxxxxx
oh More more more!
11/20/2005 c10 angel4evaxxxxx
Wow this is getting better and better but more and more...detailed...can't think of the right word but its all good can't wait for you to continue.
11/19/2005 c9 Aldo
Oh, poor Erim! *cries*

Good chapter, though. The description of the darkness was especially vivid. You have quite a way with words.
11/18/2005 c7 angel4evaxxxxx
Wow really good how your writing 3 different people in one, can't wait for you to continue.
11/18/2005 c2 11HeliosThePegasus
Lee’s parched lips break into a faint smile. ‘It’s what Lee would have wanted,’ he softly punches Erim’s arm, ‘besides, we’re mates, right?’

I think, that that first name is supposed to be Sid.Still good, keep it up
11/18/2005 c1 HeliosThePegasus
+Good+
11/17/2005 c1 2Jada.Black
This is so good. This first chapter reminds me so much of my own life. My friend hung himself in a park as well so that was overwhelmingly familiar. Also the schizophrenic behavior is something that i am quite familiar with as well. I wont go into detail.

Keep writing this! It's brilliant.

Review my story sometime. I'd love to hear your opinion.

*Jada Black*
11/17/2005 c7 Aldo
Wow. The imagery in this story is awesome! I love your writing style.

-LlaMa
11/15/2005 c5 52soulraven
Wow, this is an amazing story! I myself have Multiple Personality Disorder (They call it DID now) and this captures if perfectly!Please continue ^_^

Ciao-Raven (soulraven)
11/14/2005 c5 Aldo
Whoa, this is really, really good. I can hardly wait for the next chapter! You write really well, and this story has a very intriguing plot. Keep writing, please!

-LlaMa

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