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5/16/2008 c1 50Kristina Suko
Very good. I like the last line the best.

~Maranwe Telrunya
4/25/2008 c1 102The Hippie Nerd
I really liked this, you can feel the emotion. I like how you're walking one line, and then contradicting it and running the next. Keep on writing!
11/20/2007 c1 2xXDistantxDreamerXx
Aw~ It's so sad. That's how I felt when I was younger...I love your style of writing. It's so pretty!
11/18/2007 c1 16Avelyne
It reminds me of a small child. It's so pretty. I like your style of writing, keep it up :)
4/9/2007 c1 Keep Me Till Your Bored
I loved it. So sad and emotional. I've felt like that many times. It gets better.
3/7/2007 c1 87x.Insanely Serene.x
...this is me... i can relate, & i love this [i wish you would post something new as well
3/5/2007 c1 306Ashelin
It was really short. Good though. I loved the last two lines. Lies usually just harm us, and then life becomes confusing and even worse. Great job.
12/14/2006 c1 138iliveinadreamworld
This one is so very sad and kind of depressing, but I know a lot of people have(did or will) feel this way at one point! Write more soon!
9/25/2006 c1 41sarah1491
Wonderful . Keep writing !

‚ô•sarah
9/15/2006 c1 23Amin mela lle
wow. great poem. oddly enough I feel I can relate to this poem. how is it depressing emotions are always the best to express? haha well either way, very good! keep up with your writing

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