9/3/2007 c1 56Luna Turner
O, very good job. I liked it alot (even though you've probably heard that alot before). It's hard for some to write short poetry and convey the meaning. You kept it short and simple... yet not so simple... hehe... I'm not making any sense. Sorry.

~Kat

11/15/2005 c1 169MallowsWins
Interesting, and maybe a little disturbing. I got strnage images from this.

Peace, Daze

11/15/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Powerful detail.

Juliet.