for Gaining Souls3/11/2006 c4 
9Celeste Se'oir
^^ yay, go creepy things from the weirdest places. lol, good job. For although they are degusting, you pity them and empathized with the poor creatures. *applauds*
Later,~Ffuffy~
9Celeste Se'oir^^ yay, go creepy things from the weirdest places. lol, good job. For although they are degusting, you pity them and empathized with the poor creatures. *applauds*
Later,~Ffuffy~
11/28/2005 c1 3Colonel Sandurz
Hey, nice work. I love the ambiguity; keeps the reader guessing until the end and beyond. Keep 'em coming.
~The Colonel(You know me better as nivekttimhcs on LJ ;-))
3Colonel SandurzHey, nice work. I love the ambiguity; keeps the reader guessing until the end and beyond. Keep 'em coming.
~The Colonel(You know me better as nivekttimhcs on LJ ;-))
11/23/2005 c1 UJWF0WFW0FWE0WEF0
This is interesting. I want to know more of the queen lady and those nightmares. They sound like leppers and what parts are vamps gonna have? The immortality will preserve them, huh? So many questions. Update son.
This is interesting. I want to know more of the queen lady and those nightmares. They sound like leppers and what parts are vamps gonna have? The immortality will preserve them, huh? So many questions. Update son.
11/15/2005 c1 9Celeste Se'oir
You can't really determne a good title for a story with one chapter, so i'm afraid i can't help you much in that aspect. What I can say though is that this one chapter alone is very intriguing, and I'm glad you want to continue it. The darkness of it is incredible, and i love your word usage. I look forward to its next chapter.
Later,~Ffuffy~
9Celeste Se'oirYou can't really determne a good title for a story with one chapter, so i'm afraid i can't help you much in that aspect. What I can say though is that this one chapter alone is very intriguing, and I'm glad you want to continue it. The darkness of it is incredible, and i love your word usage. I look forward to its next chapter.
Later,~Ffuffy~