
11/15/2005 c1
5Zane Richardson Waya Wolf
Hey, I really like this, I can tell you put a lot of effort into it, but might I suggest you slow down a little, this is not an insult I truely enjoyed reading your work, but it seemed "rushed" but only in a few spots. Other than that I really truly loved reading your work ^_^

Hey, I really like this, I can tell you put a lot of effort into it, but might I suggest you slow down a little, this is not an insult I truely enjoyed reading your work, but it seemed "rushed" but only in a few spots. Other than that I really truly loved reading your work ^_^