
4/2/2007 c1
11xDancingintheRainx
Another very well written piece! The end ties everything together so nicely and even though its the end of the poem, it feels like the beginning of something else. Everything flows so wonderfully and nothing seems forced. Well done!

Another very well written piece! The end ties everything together so nicely and even though its the end of the poem, it feels like the beginning of something else. Everything flows so wonderfully and nothing seems forced. Well done!
3/25/2007 c1 Xn-v
Ah, good poetry... nothing better, nothing more I could ask for. ^^ Thankyou. *grins*
Ah, good poetry... nothing better, nothing more I could ask for. ^^ Thankyou. *grins*
3/24/2007 c1
31xForeverAndAlwaysx
i really like this.. the ending has the perfect twist to it. it seems so sad, but at the end you pull it together with a glimmer of hope.. really well done. this will definetly be on my favorites list!
-katy

i really like this.. the ending has the perfect twist to it. it seems so sad, but at the end you pull it together with a glimmer of hope.. really well done. this will definetly be on my favorites list!
-katy