for The Trojan War4/28/2008 c5 Crowmanhunter
Simply spectacular. It's even written in the same style as a Greek story. Truly, you have done a good job here.
Though it does have it's bumps and bruises here and there, but then again, what story doesn't?
Only thing that really bothered me was how when you kept emphasizing how 'beautiful' everyone was every time you described them. Like the chapter with the wedding, as you described the gods throughout that whole chapter, all I got out of it was, "Alright, alright, enough. You can see all of the female god's breasts, I get it already."
Simply spectacular. It's even written in the same style as a Greek story. Truly, you have done a good job here.
Though it does have it's bumps and bruises here and there, but then again, what story doesn't?
Only thing that really bothered me was how when you kept emphasizing how 'beautiful' everyone was every time you described them. Like the chapter with the wedding, as you described the gods throughout that whole chapter, all I got out of it was, "Alright, alright, enough. You can see all of the female god's breasts, I get it already."
12/4/2005 c3 rosie
i think this is well-written. although, I would have liked to know how much time passed from the wedding to when Thetis tried to make Achilles immortal.
i think this is well-written. although, I would have liked to know how much time passed from the wedding to when Thetis tried to make Achilles immortal.
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