
11/25/2005 c1
12364 unbirthdays
this is such a great poem, beautifully written, all flowing so well together. you did a great job in writing this, keep up the great work. -off to add to favorites-: thank you! -SudonaSunrise

this is such a great poem, beautifully written, all flowing so well together. you did a great job in writing this, keep up the great work. -off to add to favorites-: thank you! -SudonaSunrise
11/21/2005 c1
64not sure yet
the end had me thinking about the issues of conciousness being included into science and then the whole artificial intelligence and the nature of it and kind of throwing it off, i rather like that idea, really love the way this is written as well, beautiful imager in the beginning and i really love the line "but we: are not two arbitrary hands, colliding ideologies" there was a lot of interesting stuff in here, and i think it was made all the better as im sitting through chem lecture while im reading and writing this, barefoot recollections was another sweet part, muchly lovely poem, i love it, excellent job

the end had me thinking about the issues of conciousness being included into science and then the whole artificial intelligence and the nature of it and kind of throwing it off, i rather like that idea, really love the way this is written as well, beautiful imager in the beginning and i really love the line "but we: are not two arbitrary hands, colliding ideologies" there was a lot of interesting stuff in here, and i think it was made all the better as im sitting through chem lecture while im reading and writing this, barefoot recollections was another sweet part, muchly lovely poem, i love it, excellent job
11/19/2005 c1
168SeaVoi
those first lines are so cool, I can really is something sitting in front of me! It's glowing and it's pretty! Cool Poem!

those first lines are so cool, I can really is something sitting in front of me! It's glowing and it's pretty! Cool Poem!
11/19/2005 c1
127drblueface
It's so very scientific and astute. I had to read it several times to get a clear meaning to visualize in my mind ^_^
It's beautiful though, very very very beautiful!
Keep up the great work!

It's so very scientific and astute. I had to read it several times to get a clear meaning to visualize in my mind ^_^
It's beautiful though, very very very beautiful!
Keep up the great work!