for For November3/23/2008 c1 
8Written
gorgeous poem. whenever I rhyme, I sound like Dr. Seuss. You have such elegance!
8Writtengorgeous poem. whenever I rhyme, I sound like Dr. Seuss. You have such elegance!
1/21/2006 c1 9ice flyer
Beautiful beautiful poem. The images are gorgeous and the way you speak to and personify November is just so skilled. I love it.
9ice flyerBeautiful beautiful poem. The images are gorgeous and the way you speak to and personify November is just so skilled. I love it.
11/21/2005 c1 68SnoDragon
Absolutely brilliant as the driven snow. I love the repetition of endearments at the ends of each stanza, makes for lovely rhythm and rhyme. Well done!
68SnoDragonAbsolutely brilliant as the driven snow. I love the repetition of endearments at the ends of each stanza, makes for lovely rhythm and rhyme. Well done!
11/20/2005 c1 2Dawn's-End
This is my favorite of all your poems. I haven't found anyone on fictionpress who gets their poetry to flow this well or who uses the english language so expertly.
The first line is captivating and each stanza has a purpose. The quatrain from line 13-16 is particularly potent. However, every line is equally powerful.
Even if you'd written nothing else, I'd put you on my favorites list just for this poem.
2Dawn's-EndThis is my favorite of all your poems. I haven't found anyone on fictionpress who gets their poetry to flow this well or who uses the english language so expertly.
The first line is captivating and each stanza has a purpose. The quatrain from line 13-16 is particularly potent. However, every line is equally powerful.
Even if you'd written nothing else, I'd put you on my favorites list just for this poem.
11/20/2005 c1 20Pheobe Meryll
Wow, I love the concept of the last line. Your rythem is beautiful...I'm putting this on my favorites, good job!
20Pheobe MeryllWow, I love the concept of the last line. Your rythem is beautiful...I'm putting this on my favorites, good job!