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for Don't Beat

12/18/2005 c1 194Carcilwen Thorned-Rose
Excellent! I loved the rhythm. The refrain of "don't beat heart" just made it flow so well!

And thank you for the review of my poem!
12/9/2005 c1 104FunkyFlower
fantastic ending! just adore the repetition and the title's great! awesome poem and btw, quite a unique pen name!

12/3/2005 c1 11les petits bateaux
This is sweet. Some people who have gone through heartbreaks keep on droning about how their heart actually breaks and they can't love again. This is very unique as you give the reader the idea that the heart will always beat until we can't love anymore. Excellent job.

12/1/2005 c1 20Mei-Mei the SciFi Junkie
great piece ^_^ nice repition and flow, not to mention a topic that's easy to relate to
11/25/2005 c1 183writerforever
Wonderful poem! You did a really good job writing it :).
11/19/2005 c1 38SassyLil'Thunderstorm
yeah, sometimes I wish my heart would stop beating, or that I could just stop being able to feel pain anymore...but lemme get off the depressing kick...good job!
11/19/2005 c1 5Nagroom92
nice poetry, x-ms-poeticc. and thankz 4 commenting on my story. i write poetry along with stories and i'm hoping it posted. and i'm attempting to post the rest of it. thankz again.


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