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4/24/2006 c1 21Jonah
i like this one. it's beautiful.
11/28/2005 c1 hahahahahaha
Normally I prefer religious poetry to be more subtle and implicit, as it highlights the true and complex nature of our spirituality. But this was quite well executed I guess. A bit overwritten though?
11/20/2005 c1 169wantedINheaven
OMG - Really!

That's magnificent... so going on my favourite's list. There's just something about this that cpatures even the tiniest bit of what Jesus is - and that tiny bit is more than anyone can hope to describe.

Great job!
11/20/2005 c1 136Elliptical Shapes
I would advise you to gather information before being blinded by religion.

Though I have talked to enough Christians to know whell enough that even in the face of overwhelming evidence, you guys still believe in a simple story.

Peace be with you, hopefully one day you'll wake up.
11/20/2005 c1 46a headless butterfly
i am beyond blown away. "Like light shattering into glitter,Gentle softness floating down.Turning into fire;Into power, into love.GoldshimmersparkleGLORY." i adore tht. and also the lines from "strong enough to hold the heavens" onwards, ALL the lines. they convey such a breathtakingly strong meaning.this is awesome, really.salutes you three thousand and one times fe and btw wht's create2005?

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