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5/23/2009 c1 1ThereIsTime
absoloutley loved it.

where did you learn to write like that?

WOW
2/21/2006 c1 32bleeding subterfuge
the line, 'my body is all pills, bulimia and fake lace' and 'kerosene joy' excellent... indescribable... love the entire poem.
1/11/2006 c1 re x invented
this is amazing. i can't believe i'v never read any of your stuff before... love it. favorites for you.
12/27/2005 c1 Eboniccinderella
This is REALLY good.All I can say is I like your creativity and what you did with destroy.
12/11/2005 c1 52AboveTheSalt
again, love the repition. love your style. gruesome and rhyming, no less. simply whore-ible.
12/9/2005 c1 83Prevaricate
"I never falter/(but my love's been spent)/and everything's uninnocent)"

God, that leaves a good taste in my mouth.

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12/1/2005 c1 115HauntedMisery
Oh wow, this is amazing, great work!
11/28/2005 c1 77by His blood
- ilovethis. i absolutely a d o r e all of your writing, it's fucking brilliant. this poem is no exception. really, truly amazing. please, please keep writing.

-.bfota
11/23/2005 c1 90WiltingBlackRose
I am so jealous of your poems...No, seriously...
11/22/2005 c1 twenty-second seduction
my my.this is wonderfully written.
11/22/2005 c1 60dollface and her cancer
Dress them all up in kerosene joy.. the sarcastic, slanting, sharp rhyming sends you jagged all the way through, and I adore that. A poem that hits you in splinters. All it needs is a guitar solo. Perfect.
11/21/2005 c1 addie pray
This was really fast and pounding. Lotta bitter all wrapped up in this, fantastic fantastic job.
11/20/2005 c1 25Lavender341
I liked this! I love the mental images it brings to my mind.

Keep writing!

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