for rewriting my epitaph7/3/2010 c1 
495mate.feed.kill.repeat
"i fucking (diedforourtruth) give up."
Shit. I don't even know what to say. But every time I read this, it takes me back to a place where maybe I don't necessarily want to be, but I can't possibly forget.
-stix-
495mate.feed.kill.repeat"i fucking (diedforourtruth) give up."
Shit. I don't even know what to say. But every time I read this, it takes me back to a place where maybe I don't necessarily want to be, but I can't possibly forget.
-stix-
10/21/2006 c1 77by His blood
i'm really sorry if you misunderstood my review on '24 over insomnia' (aka beauty). i felt it more than i have before because of shit that happened, i'm not saying that i know exactly what this is because i haven't felt anything close to this. i wasn't saying that at all. it's just that ... this hits so hard now more than ever and fuck, it hurts to read partially because it's so beautiful.
'denial reigns. i didn't know. i didn't know. i didn't know. is that your idea of an apology? i fucking diedforourtruth give up. better keep crying my blood's not washing off.'
i swear kait, your writing is going to break me one day. it's too fucking beautiful i can't stand it. blah write something horrible and dedicate it to me so it proves you're human and not some writing goddess okay? fuck.
i'm almost crying. fuck it.
alison
77by His bloodi'm really sorry if you misunderstood my review on '24 over insomnia' (aka beauty). i felt it more than i have before because of shit that happened, i'm not saying that i know exactly what this is because i haven't felt anything close to this. i wasn't saying that at all. it's just that ... this hits so hard now more than ever and fuck, it hurts to read partially because it's so beautiful.
'denial reigns. i didn't know. i didn't know. i didn't know. is that your idea of an apology? i fucking diedforourtruth give up. better keep crying my blood's not washing off.'
i swear kait, your writing is going to break me one day. it's too fucking beautiful i can't stand it. blah write something horrible and dedicate it to me so it proves you're human and not some writing goddess okay? fuck.
i'm almost crying. fuck it.
alison
9/13/2006 c1 64realityescapesher
i LOVE ""i d i d n ' t k n o w."/is that your idea of an apology?" that's SO true.
64realityescapesheri LOVE ""i d i d n ' t k n o w."/is that your idea of an apology?" that's SO true.
3/30/2006 c1 40Doray
This is how I see it:
(words) - side comment
Italics - additional feelings kept within; gives more intense elaboration of previous thought
Bold - emphasis
spaces, e.g. I d i d n' t k n o w - gives the feeling of the overall atmosphere/impact of the idea. Denial reigns. :P
Lovely poem, K8.
40DorayThis is how I see it:
(words) - side comment
Italics - additional feelings kept within; gives more intense elaboration of previous thought
Bold - emphasis
spaces, e.g. I d i d n' t k n o w - gives the feeling of the overall atmosphere/impact of the idea. Denial reigns. :P
Lovely poem, K8.
3/25/2006 c1 34The Melancholy Astronaut
Frightening and powerful. You might want to change the rating from K+ to T.
34The Melancholy AstronautFrightening and powerful. You might want to change the rating from K+ to T.
2/5/2006 c1 64Samara-chan
Your formatting is SO GOOD, the way you write is SO GOOD, just everything is... well, so good. Unique. Flowing, elegant, angsty, man I love it. A very interesting idea for a poem. GREAT work.
64Samara-chanYour formatting is SO GOOD, the way you write is SO GOOD, just everything is... well, so good. Unique. Flowing, elegant, angsty, man I love it. A very interesting idea for a poem. GREAT work.
1/20/2006 c1 18Rovandin
Garagurating. I have NO idea what that means. or what epitaph is defined as. Nice poem. I'm honestly way too freaking beaking tired and I've just snapped, again. again i'm ten again.
18RovandinGaragurating. I have NO idea what that means. or what epitaph is defined as. Nice poem. I'm honestly way too freaking beaking tired and I've just snapped, again. again i'm ten again.
1/20/2006 c1 31i am valentine
That was the freaking best thing I've ever read on this site! You are so amazing at poetry, I envy you. Wow...
31i am valentineThat was the freaking best thing I've ever read on this site! You are so amazing at poetry, I envy you. Wow...
1/1/2006 c1 24Tr APeze-sWiNGer
Extremely powerful; the formatting helps. Sometimes writing good angst is hard, but you've hit it well. This is going on my favorites.
24Tr APeze-sWiNGerExtremely powerful; the formatting helps. Sometimes writing good angst is hard, but you've hit it well. This is going on my favorites.
12/27/2005 c1 21deluded soul
holy frickin crap.ok, can i just say-your really really good.and i wish i was as cool as you.i find this shockingly beautiful and heartfelt. yeah, heartfelt. its beautiful.
21deluded soulholy frickin crap.ok, can i just say-your really really good.and i wish i was as cool as you.i find this shockingly beautiful and heartfelt. yeah, heartfelt. its beautiful.
12/21/2005 c1 silkstar
thats so fucking beautiful...kinda shakespearean...shaksperean..shakes-yeah that with the format.
thats so fucking beautiful...kinda shakespearean...shaksperean..shakes-yeah that with the format.