for Shards of Glass4/19/2006 c1 
41FreezingFire
So pretty... the imagery and the rhyme are awesome... it's amazing...Thanks for the review.
41FreezingFireSo pretty... the imagery and the rhyme are awesome... it's amazing...Thanks for the review.
2/2/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
The sound in this is marvelous. I had to take some breaths while reading to catch up with the sound and the buffet of alliteration. Excellent work.
879Moondog DozierThe sound in this is marvelous. I had to take some breaths while reading to catch up with the sound and the buffet of alliteration. Excellent work.
12/28/2005 c1 35Daffodil Elizabeth
Wow... Great imagery. There are so many elements incorporated into this poem! I love the alliteration, as well as the one internal rhyme in the last line of the first stanza. It was great! "...fading shades and ocean graves." Overall, a great poem with lots of symbolism.
35Daffodil ElizabethWow... Great imagery. There are so many elements incorporated into this poem! I love the alliteration, as well as the one internal rhyme in the last line of the first stanza. It was great! "...fading shades and ocean graves." Overall, a great poem with lots of symbolism.
12/20/2005 c1 36amanda.h
Your rhyming is incredible. I find it so hard to get a poem to flow while it rhymes. Awesome work.
36amanda.hYour rhyming is incredible. I find it so hard to get a poem to flow while it rhymes. Awesome work.
12/4/2005 c1 19K. Silence
Beautiful... really really good. You make me wanna puke. *all two thumbs up* Great writing. Why aren't you published? Or are you?
19K. SilenceBeautiful... really really good. You make me wanna puke. *all two thumbs up* Great writing. Why aren't you published? Or are you?
12/1/2005 c1 3FurballofEvilness
You get eighty-thousand-four-hundred-twenty-six points for having a rhyming poem.
Beautiful imagery. 'glittering beneath furling waves' just made me take a deep breath and go 'oh'. This means that it rocked my socks.
You have some incredible talent, yo. *gives very many cookies and cans of sprite*
3FurballofEvilnessYou get eighty-thousand-four-hundred-twenty-six points for having a rhyming poem.
Beautiful imagery. 'glittering beneath furling waves' just made me take a deep breath and go 'oh'. This means that it rocked my socks.
You have some incredible talent, yo. *gives very many cookies and cans of sprite*
11/27/2005 c1 23Marjorie Swann
Wow, very mysterious. There are so many possibilities for what could have happened to break the glass, the "things that I'll not know..." It really makes me wonder what happened! I like it!
23Marjorie SwannWow, very mysterious. There are so many possibilities for what could have happened to break the glass, the "things that I'll not know..." It really makes me wonder what happened! I like it!
11/22/2005 c1 24youthinkyouknowme
OMG! I don't know what to say! The imagery was marvelous, and the poem itself just blew my mind! (It literally left me speechless!)
Keep it up please!
24youthinkyouknowmeOMG! I don't know what to say! The imagery was marvelous, and the poem itself just blew my mind! (It literally left me speechless!)
Keep it up please!
11/22/2005 c1 298Moon-Chaser
I love the way that you worded this, very well done.
keep it up.
Thanks for reviewing.
298Moon-ChaserI love the way that you worded this, very well done.
keep it up.
Thanks for reviewing.
11/22/2005 c1 87youzi
loved the rhyming which made this piece flow well..rare because rhyming poems are so hard to write. do keep writing :D
87youziloved the rhyming which made this piece flow well..rare because rhyming poems are so hard to write. do keep writing :D
11/21/2005 c1 39SliversofSilverPain
I LOVE THIS! beautiful use of rhyme, amazinf imagery. brilliant poem! i just love the first paragraph, stanza thing... so cool! i love the concept, and the way you used ideas behind glass for anything that you could; masterpiece
39SliversofSilverPainI LOVE THIS! beautiful use of rhyme, amazinf imagery. brilliant poem! i just love the first paragraph, stanza thing... so cool! i love the concept, and the way you used ideas behind glass for anything that you could; masterpiece