
11/21/2005 c1
12Lohan Layten
Really good, very powerful...
Especially for a found poem! The italics, underlines, bolds, etc. are very useful in this poem, and your point is well taken. I like this piece very much.
A++.
- L.L.

Really good, very powerful...
Especially for a found poem! The italics, underlines, bolds, etc. are very useful in this poem, and your point is well taken. I like this piece very much.
A++.
- L.L.
11/21/2005 c1
7The System Mother
I love the useage of all of the bolds, italics, and underlines in this poem. Really brings a powerful touch to it!

I love the useage of all of the bolds, italics, and underlines in this poem. Really brings a powerful touch to it!