for Claustrophobic Fairytales11/21/2005 c1 
229TheBrokenWanderer
My honest opinion is that for feeling so emotionless, you wrote one hell of an emotional poem...I was riveted by this one...I can't explain how it affected me, and I really can't explain why...but when I got to the end, it sent shivers down my spine...
~TheBrokenWanderer~
229TheBrokenWandererMy honest opinion is that for feeling so emotionless, you wrote one hell of an emotional poem...I was riveted by this one...I can't explain how it affected me, and I really can't explain why...but when I got to the end, it sent shivers down my spine...
~TheBrokenWanderer~
11/21/2005 c1 the collision of your kiss
I really like it! I found it really hard to pick a favorite line because they were all so good, but I think I've chosen "I want to see what’s r.e.a.l Not your candy-coated (fruit-flavoured)" I love that. And I love what you did with the formatting. Looks like you had fun. :P Anyway, great work, keep ti up! ^.^ (Love the title, by the way.)
I really like it! I found it really hard to pick a favorite line because they were all so good, but I think I've chosen "I want to see what’s r.e.a.l Not your candy-coated (fruit-flavoured)" I love that. And I love what you did with the formatting. Looks like you had fun. :P Anyway, great work, keep ti up! ^.^ (Love the title, by the way.)