for Nice Guys Always Finish2/15/2006 c16 
9milenaa
hey therei was wondering what had happened to youim glad everything is just finewell i liked the new chapter and cant wait to find more about alexandra!
9milenaahey therei was wondering what had happened to youim glad everything is just finewell i liked the new chapter and cant wait to find more about alexandra!
2/15/2006 c17 Kythia
"my mind is open, my mind is open"
She is a work in progress. I just do not know. The whole I-am-willing-to-cheat-on-my-boyfriend-to-be-with-you thing really put me off. I just do not think that she deserves Erik. The fact that she seems so fickle is..irritating? The entire time she was talking to erik while they were walking and while they were on the cell, I was like, "She is lying. There is not party. She is lying!" but maybe she isn't, becasue you like her as a character and would not make her do that if you were trying to show her good side.
Her dad is an a-hole. Or seems like one. Why? Cause Erik is such a good guy, and he is positivly murderous!
great chapter though... but he should have kissed her. See? I have an open mind!
Until the next review,
~Kythia
"my mind is open, my mind is open"
She is a work in progress. I just do not know. The whole I-am-willing-to-cheat-on-my-boyfriend-to-be-with-you thing really put me off. I just do not think that she deserves Erik. The fact that she seems so fickle is..irritating? The entire time she was talking to erik while they were walking and while they were on the cell, I was like, "She is lying. There is not party. She is lying!" but maybe she isn't, becasue you like her as a character and would not make her do that if you were trying to show her good side.
Her dad is an a-hole. Or seems like one. Why? Cause Erik is such a good guy, and he is positivly murderous!
great chapter though... but he should have kissed her. See? I have an open mind!
Until the next review,
~Kythia
2/15/2006 c17 11les petits bateaux
I guess I could clean up the whole "I-hate-Christine" act and just keep (like what you said) an open mind about her. Maybe she'd change for the better, maybe for the worst, but we'll just have to see then. Anyways, I really liked this chapter, though I thought Abby might have cut Erik some slack because he WAS in a bad mood...I guess she doesn't really believe that Erik was so bad to her. Really can't believe you're not going to make them kiss...well then, since you've given a perfectly valid reason why they aren't going to then I'm going to stop trying to scream. Lol. Good ol' Jake and Adam, they're like the wonder-boys of this story, always trying to keep things cool between Ben and Erik, though I really don't blame Ben for not talking to Erik and being mad at him. Really good story coming along, and I just can't wait to read more. Yum.
11les petits bateauxI guess I could clean up the whole "I-hate-Christine" act and just keep (like what you said) an open mind about her. Maybe she'd change for the better, maybe for the worst, but we'll just have to see then. Anyways, I really liked this chapter, though I thought Abby might have cut Erik some slack because he WAS in a bad mood...I guess she doesn't really believe that Erik was so bad to her. Really can't believe you're not going to make them kiss...well then, since you've given a perfectly valid reason why they aren't going to then I'm going to stop trying to scream. Lol. Good ol' Jake and Adam, they're like the wonder-boys of this story, always trying to keep things cool between Ben and Erik, though I really don't blame Ben for not talking to Erik and being mad at him. Really good story coming along, and I just can't wait to read more. Yum.
2/15/2006 c17 pocket.mouse.poppet
Okay, so then Alexandra has importance, and I don't know what it is yet. I suppose that means I'll just have to watch out for her to turn up again and do or say whatever it is that she's going to do or say. Also, what's going to happen with Ben? Will he stay mad? Is he going to have major involvement in the future plot, or is he no longer a huge part of this twisted love triangle. Apart from being Erik's roommate, I mean. And am i going to get to see Mrs. C again? She's cool.
Shinies To All!
Okay, so then Alexandra has importance, and I don't know what it is yet. I suppose that means I'll just have to watch out for her to turn up again and do or say whatever it is that she's going to do or say. Also, what's going to happen with Ben? Will he stay mad? Is he going to have major involvement in the future plot, or is he no longer a huge part of this twisted love triangle. Apart from being Erik's roommate, I mean. And am i going to get to see Mrs. C again? She's cool.
Shinies To All!
2/9/2006 c16 2lyokolady
Ah, you got to love Cassie. She's my faovrite character right now. No drama, no jealousy, love the sarcasm. She's like me! ;) Anyways, can't wait for the next update!
lyokolady
2lyokoladyAh, you got to love Cassie. She's my faovrite character right now. No drama, no jealousy, love the sarcasm. She's like me! ;) Anyways, can't wait for the next update!
lyokolady
2/9/2006 c16 1the-water-goddess-007
cute...cassie's so much cooler than christine...w/e tho...update soon!
1the-water-goddess-007cute...cassie's so much cooler than christine...w/e tho...update soon!
2/9/2006 c16 Kythia
She is definatly getting better...
I was starting to wonder what happened to you...it was taking a while to update. That is, for you. You are an amazingly quick updater, and I love you for it!
~Kythia
She is definatly getting better...
I was starting to wonder what happened to you...it was taking a while to update. That is, for you. You are an amazingly quick updater, and I love you for it!
~Kythia
2/9/2006 c16 11les petits bateaux
YES! Finally you're back! You do know how much I'm suffering without NGAF, yeah? And at last Erik gets what he wants...Christine. But I just can't help thinking that Erik wants much much more than just Christine herself and it's just not meant to be...funny how at the start of this story I actually wanted them to be together..sigh...anyways, what's the deal with the whole bringing in of this Alexandra? Don't get the wrong idea, I'm loving her already, I really have this whole mindset of her all mapped out in front of me, and I must say she sounds really promising. Probably another one who falls in love with Erik? Way to go to add more spice to the love triangle! :D
11les petits bateauxYES! Finally you're back! You do know how much I'm suffering without NGAF, yeah? And at last Erik gets what he wants...Christine. But I just can't help thinking that Erik wants much much more than just Christine herself and it's just not meant to be...funny how at the start of this story I actually wanted them to be together..sigh...anyways, what's the deal with the whole bringing in of this Alexandra? Don't get the wrong idea, I'm loving her already, I really have this whole mindset of her all mapped out in front of me, and I must say she sounds really promising. Probably another one who falls in love with Erik? Way to go to add more spice to the love triangle! :D
2/9/2006 c16 pocket.mouse.poppet
Darn! I wanna see Erik and Ana popping blood vessels. That'd be pretty funny... Oh well. Anyway, why don't they get together? It's jsut that I thought they'd be really good, but there's probably something I've missed, so explain.
And I got to see and Erik and Christine moment. Those two are so cute. Except for that part where Ben happens to be involved. And the part where Jake is mad.
Anyway, what's with this new character-this Alexandra. Is there going to be any great significance for her in the rest of the story, if so what area of Erik's life will she be involved in (will they only see each other at work, or will she become involved in some other part of Erik's life, like dating one of his friends or something?)
Shinies To All!
Darn! I wanna see Erik and Ana popping blood vessels. That'd be pretty funny... Oh well. Anyway, why don't they get together? It's jsut that I thought they'd be really good, but there's probably something I've missed, so explain.
And I got to see and Erik and Christine moment. Those two are so cute. Except for that part where Ben happens to be involved. And the part where Jake is mad.
Anyway, what's with this new character-this Alexandra. Is there going to be any great significance for her in the rest of the story, if so what area of Erik's life will she be involved in (will they only see each other at work, or will she become involved in some other part of Erik's life, like dating one of his friends or something?)
Shinies To All!
1/22/2006 c1 Salt and Vinegar Pringles
Sup? First chapter - this is Erik Erik isn't it? Ana's bro? Yay!
Sup? First chapter - this is Erik Erik isn't it? Ana's bro? Yay!
1/6/2006 c15 3miss-blackhair
okay, i know i havent been reviewing since chap 13 .yes, i've been keeping track coz i read the chappies beforehand but didnt have time to review and partly coz, im sorry, christine's such a bitch. lol. i mean, i feel she really is one. well, juz to keep everything short and sweet, the chapters are great, especially the ana part. yupp, thats all i have to say right now. i think i'll flood the review window on the next chapter, HOPEFULLY. =) update soon!
3miss-blackhairokay, i know i havent been reviewing since chap 13 .yes, i've been keeping track coz i read the chappies beforehand but didnt have time to review and partly coz, im sorry, christine's such a bitch. lol. i mean, i feel she really is one. well, juz to keep everything short and sweet, the chapters are great, especially the ana part. yupp, thats all i have to say right now. i think i'll flood the review window on the next chapter, HOPEFULLY. =) update soon!
1/2/2006 c15 5aqua-angel
Well she's trying to win Erik back and at the same time, she's going to have to win all of us readers over as well. It's going to take me a while to like her. I mean, I feel sorry for her and all but ... I still don't really like her honestly. The first time she was introduced, that was alright. If she didn't realize her extent of her feelings for Erik until after the break-up, then I think I'd like her a lot more. It's like what Ana said. Also, for more than 10 chapters (excluding the beginning chapter where she's introduced), I have come to dislike her more and more. So, with that all against her and my opinion firmly made up of her for... more than a month, it will be a while for me to get used to the idea of Erik and her together. *sighs*.
Other than that, thanks for updating. Hope your New Year's was good!
5aqua-angelWell she's trying to win Erik back and at the same time, she's going to have to win all of us readers over as well. It's going to take me a while to like her. I mean, I feel sorry for her and all but ... I still don't really like her honestly. The first time she was introduced, that was alright. If she didn't realize her extent of her feelings for Erik until after the break-up, then I think I'd like her a lot more. It's like what Ana said. Also, for more than 10 chapters (excluding the beginning chapter where she's introduced), I have come to dislike her more and more. So, with that all against her and my opinion firmly made up of her for... more than a month, it will be a while for me to get used to the idea of Erik and her together. *sighs*.
Other than that, thanks for updating. Hope your New Year's was good!
1/1/2006 c15 Cara4428
oh, thats interesting. I have some choice words but I won't say it. Should give her a chance? it seems like you are writing her as somewhat of a distraction so we think they are going to hook up but in the end, we all hope it's not going to happen. well, thats my prediction, if that made any sense. I am on cold medicine right now and don't know how much sense I am making right now. anyways, happy new years! hope to read a new chapter soon!
oh, thats interesting. I have some choice words but I won't say it. Should give her a chance? it seems like you are writing her as somewhat of a distraction so we think they are going to hook up but in the end, we all hope it's not going to happen. well, thats my prediction, if that made any sense. I am on cold medicine right now and don't know how much sense I am making right now. anyways, happy new years! hope to read a new chapter soon!
1/1/2006 c15 11les petits bateaux
Yes, you're right. I do want to run Christine over with an 18-wheeler. Lol. She's somewhat two-timing, don't you think. Anyways, I just simply love Aidan. Even though he sounds like your average annoying younger brother, he's so cute.
Damn, I really thought that both of them were gonna make out since Christine had already broke it off with Ben but I guess she had to leave him question. Love the last line, because Erik sounded so 'teasy'. Excellent job here.
11les petits bateauxYes, you're right. I do want to run Christine over with an 18-wheeler. Lol. She's somewhat two-timing, don't you think. Anyways, I just simply love Aidan. Even though he sounds like your average annoying younger brother, he's so cute.
Damn, I really thought that both of them were gonna make out since Christine had already broke it off with Ben but I guess she had to leave him question. Love the last line, because Erik sounded so 'teasy'. Excellent job here.