for Nice Guys Always Finish11/22/2005 c1 pocket.mouse.poppet
Cute... Poor Erik though. And I have read The Shadow. I think I left something like one measly review. Bad, naughty, lazy me.
Is Erik going to get bulldozed? Is he going to grow a backbone? Is Ana going to play any part in this story? What about his mum?
And the list goes on. Sorry for not reviewing The Shadow (I don't think one review counts) and I'll try to review every chapter of this one to make up for it.
Shinies To All!
Cute... Poor Erik though. And I have read The Shadow. I think I left something like one measly review. Bad, naughty, lazy me.
Is Erik going to get bulldozed? Is he going to grow a backbone? Is Ana going to play any part in this story? What about his mum?
And the list goes on. Sorry for not reviewing The Shadow (I don't think one review counts) and I'll try to review every chapter of this one to make up for it.
Shinies To All!
11/22/2005 c1 
5aqua-angel
Aw what a start to Erik's story! I love the intro, I could pretty much see the drunk Jake standing haphazardly on the table and then yelling for beer. You did an excellent job of painting the scene =)
I really like this chapter, there's just so much crazyness going on. I love the voice of the story and how I feel like I know him a lot more ^^ And he actually sounds like a guy too! (hehe, well you know what I mean. In some stories, the guys seem too much like girls).
*tear* Poor Erik, I felt a little embarassed for him in the kitchen when he interrupted and then the two of them looked at him like they just noticed him. OuCh, that gotta sux.
He really is such a nice guy... so cute, sweet, adorable *swoons* Moving along...
Hm... I wonder what Christine thinks of Erik though. No doubt, there's some attraction between her and Ben... =S but what about Erik? Oh, and I'm guessing that this story continues right after Ana's?
2:20 AM. Joy. I just finished my psych test but I got to get up early in the morning, so I'm going to turn in. Once again, you're off to a great start. If you're still up, you should go to bed! LoLz~ happy writings!
5aqua-angelAw what a start to Erik's story! I love the intro, I could pretty much see the drunk Jake standing haphazardly on the table and then yelling for beer. You did an excellent job of painting the scene =)
I really like this chapter, there's just so much crazyness going on. I love the voice of the story and how I feel like I know him a lot more ^^ And he actually sounds like a guy too! (hehe, well you know what I mean. In some stories, the guys seem too much like girls).
*tear* Poor Erik, I felt a little embarassed for him in the kitchen when he interrupted and then the two of them looked at him like they just noticed him. OuCh, that gotta sux.
He really is such a nice guy... so cute, sweet, adorable *swoons* Moving along...
Hm... I wonder what Christine thinks of Erik though. No doubt, there's some attraction between her and Ben... =S but what about Erik? Oh, and I'm guessing that this story continues right after Ana's?
2:20 AM. Joy. I just finished my psych test but I got to get up early in the morning, so I'm going to turn in. Once again, you're off to a great start. If you're still up, you should go to bed! LoLz~ happy writings!