for Nice Guys Always Finish4/12/2006 c33 
9milenaa
hey there! so sorry that I totally disappeared from the story! I promise to try to catch on the reviews! my computer was being a major B.I.T.C.H. to me and only today i finally got it fixed! Anyways, I like it so far. is it too mean if i say i'm happy she died? lol and I like the whole alexandra NOT dying thing WAY better than when she died! Alex is one of my favorite characters! She's a close second to Izzy! LOL
9milenaahey there! so sorry that I totally disappeared from the story! I promise to try to catch on the reviews! my computer was being a major B.I.T.C.H. to me and only today i finally got it fixed! Anyways, I like it so far. is it too mean if i say i'm happy she died? lol and I like the whole alexandra NOT dying thing WAY better than when she died! Alex is one of my favorite characters! She's a close second to Izzy! LOL
4/12/2006 c33 11les petits bateaux
The news that Erik's mother was dead started getting predictable when the officer asked him to sit down. If Erik was going to be exasperated and very, very depressed about this piece of horrible news, than what about Ana? I really don't want to think about what they have to go through. Welfare? I don't think that's a problem but their mother. Dead. It will be one hell of a ride. I enjoyed the little part about Cassie and Erik in the middle. That really helps quite build up the plot, really, no matter how short it was. It really showed Erik's eagerness to reconcile with Cassie. Anyways, I pity you for the load of work that you have. Thank you for telling your readers the reason that you haven't been updating because I really thought you were going to put this story on hold and you know...I would probably die if you do. The plot really builds up here. This story is all about twisting plots and making Erik suffer, isn't it? Heehee.
11les petits bateauxThe news that Erik's mother was dead started getting predictable when the officer asked him to sit down. If Erik was going to be exasperated and very, very depressed about this piece of horrible news, than what about Ana? I really don't want to think about what they have to go through. Welfare? I don't think that's a problem but their mother. Dead. It will be one hell of a ride. I enjoyed the little part about Cassie and Erik in the middle. That really helps quite build up the plot, really, no matter how short it was. It really showed Erik's eagerness to reconcile with Cassie. Anyways, I pity you for the load of work that you have. Thank you for telling your readers the reason that you haven't been updating because I really thought you were going to put this story on hold and you know...I would probably die if you do. The plot really builds up here. This story is all about twisting plots and making Erik suffer, isn't it? Heehee.
4/9/2006 c32 k8t
*confused face* man that was weird...not the plot jus the fact that the last time i read your story its was about teh hosatge thing and then when i come to check out your new chapter i was like huh...it took a while before i realised that NO i hadnt read it wrong but it was changed...i like better and i cant wait to find out the resulf of the new twist about their mum kicking the bucket... adien sounds adorable and with the whole age thing and littel children speaking...each is different arent they? like some devlope faster or slower than others...any way i thought that i should tell you that i really enjoy reading your work and good luck with your studies and dont stress too much or party too little...ciao k8t
*confused face* man that was weird...not the plot jus the fact that the last time i read your story its was about teh hosatge thing and then when i come to check out your new chapter i was like huh...it took a while before i realised that NO i hadnt read it wrong but it was changed...i like better and i cant wait to find out the resulf of the new twist about their mum kicking the bucket... adien sounds adorable and with the whole age thing and littel children speaking...each is different arent they? like some devlope faster or slower than others...any way i thought that i should tell you that i really enjoy reading your work and good luck with your studies and dont stress too much or party too little...ciao k8t
4/7/2006 c32 8Silenced Thoughts
WHERE ARE YOU? I need more this story- you just left me hanging... I wanted to tell you im addicted to your writing...You truly have a talent...
8Silenced ThoughtsWHERE ARE YOU? I need more this story- you just left me hanging... I wanted to tell you im addicted to your writing...You truly have a talent...
3/26/2006 c32 pocket.mouse.poppet
Jeez, I am a crap reviewer. How many have I missed? Oh well, I strained my wrist or something and I'm not supposed to type, play piano, or play guitar. With a school guitar concert next weekend and two typed assignments due tomorrow... All hail anti-inflammatories.
Alexandra has a kid? Whoa... Izzy has a new boyfriend? Eh, that's normal...
I suppose I'll just have to wait until next chapter to see what's gonna happen, and what is the note at the beginning of the chapter for, or is it none of my business?
Shinies To All!
Jeez, I am a crap reviewer. How many have I missed? Oh well, I strained my wrist or something and I'm not supposed to type, play piano, or play guitar. With a school guitar concert next weekend and two typed assignments due tomorrow... All hail anti-inflammatories.
Alexandra has a kid? Whoa... Izzy has a new boyfriend? Eh, that's normal...
I suppose I'll just have to wait until next chapter to see what's gonna happen, and what is the note at the beginning of the chapter for, or is it none of my business?
Shinies To All!
3/25/2006 c32 3miss-blackhair
this one is better than the previous action packed one. ana's so fun. sorry i cant give you a long review this time. i have to study HISTORY now. gosh! haha, update soon!
3miss-blackhairthis one is better than the previous action packed one. ana's so fun. sorry i cant give you a long review this time. i have to study HISTORY now. gosh! haha, update soon!
3/24/2006 c32 Kythia
Good new chapter. I kindof like this chapter better than the one beofre it, ya know? I don't, but I love it when Ana is in the chapter, so yeah...lol. I'm tired, and cant think... so I'll just go now...
~Kythia
Good new chapter. I kindof like this chapter better than the one beofre it, ya know? I don't, but I love it when Ana is in the chapter, so yeah...lol. I'm tired, and cant think... so I'll just go now...
~Kythia
3/24/2006 c32 Mystik-Rose
I like this chapter a lot better, though the last one was dramatic and set more of a plot line as to where it was going. However, if the author isn't happy, then you won't like the rest of the story, so I'm glad you changed it. I approve ^_^
I like this chapter a lot better, though the last one was dramatic and set more of a plot line as to where it was going. However, if the author isn't happy, then you won't like the rest of the story, so I'm glad you changed it. I approve ^_^
3/23/2006 c32 cytherea's flaw
Whew. I'm so glad those reviews got to you; because I cannot imagine what the store would be like without her...oh wait. She just quit. That's amazing, you know, I mean, I think that she'll return, so I'm not that hyper and angry at you right now. But really, don't make her go forever and never come back; Erik would probably never forgive himself for that. Hee-Hee. Erik cleaned his room. Hee-Hee. :D
Whew. I'm so glad those reviews got to you; because I cannot imagine what the store would be like without her...oh wait. She just quit. That's amazing, you know, I mean, I think that she'll return, so I'm not that hyper and angry at you right now. But really, don't make her go forever and never come back; Erik would probably never forgive himself for that. Hee-Hee. Erik cleaned his room. Hee-Hee. :D
3/22/2006 c32 26invisible.writer
Interesting cliffhanger. I don't mean to offend, but when you first started this story, it seemed really realistic and easy to relate, but as the story continues - mostly this chapter - it just turns overdramatic and unnecessary. I’m still looking forward to the conclusion as I’m sure you’ve got more up your sleeve, but I just wanted to give you some honest feedback. Please don't take this the wrong way - this is not a flame.
26invisible.writerInteresting cliffhanger. I don't mean to offend, but when you first started this story, it seemed really realistic and easy to relate, but as the story continues - mostly this chapter - it just turns overdramatic and unnecessary. I’m still looking forward to the conclusion as I’m sure you’ve got more up your sleeve, but I just wanted to give you some honest feedback. Please don't take this the wrong way - this is not a flame.
3/21/2006 c32 11les petits bateaux
Alexandra cannot be dead...not now. You really really crossed the line here, Amanda -that is your name...right?-, Alexandra might be in critical condition, but please let her not die like that. Erik...was just in a state of shock and confusion, but you really hit this plot. Excellent suspense. :D
11les petits bateauxAlexandra cannot be dead...not now. You really really crossed the line here, Amanda -that is your name...right?-, Alexandra might be in critical condition, but please let her not die like that. Erik...was just in a state of shock and confusion, but you really hit this plot. Excellent suspense. :D
3/19/2006 c31 Kythia
This really did not sooth me at all. ubt it did tell me that Alexandra has a little daughter, or a baby sister she has to take care of.
I hate that little bitch for not standing up to her father...
:Grumbles about girls without backbones:
~Kythia
This really did not sooth me at all. ubt it did tell me that Alexandra has a little daughter, or a baby sister she has to take care of.
I hate that little bitch for not standing up to her father...
:Grumbles about girls without backbones:
~Kythia
3/17/2006 c31 11les petits bateaux
You're funny you know. Just a few weeks ago you're updating like mad and now there's this quite long hiatus until you managed to get out another chapter. Lol. Anyways, thank God Aidan and Alexandra are distractions to Erik, because if they weren't there, he'd just be thinking about Christine. Sigh. I don't get it with Alexandra though...hmm. We'll just have to see in the other chapters. Good chap. :)
11les petits bateauxYou're funny you know. Just a few weeks ago you're updating like mad and now there's this quite long hiatus until you managed to get out another chapter. Lol. Anyways, thank God Aidan and Alexandra are distractions to Erik, because if they weren't there, he'd just be thinking about Christine. Sigh. I don't get it with Alexandra though...hmm. We'll just have to see in the other chapters. Good chap. :)