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20Twilight Starr
Beautifully written work. It is sad. Great job! Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrBeautifully written work. It is sad. Great job! Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day.
~Twilight Starr~
4/7/2006 c1 4Stylo
Oh wow.
That one's a beautiful one. Or rather, prettyful. Veery prettyful.
The last line packs a subtle punch. I love it.
I think I should try this form of poetry. I can write cinquians and sonnets and so on, but never haiku. Pah.
But really. I love this. Going on faves for...well, you know why it is. =)
~*Bambam*~
4StyloOh wow.
That one's a beautiful one. Or rather, prettyful. Veery prettyful.
The last line packs a subtle punch. I love it.
I think I should try this form of poetry. I can write cinquians and sonnets and so on, but never haiku. Pah.
But really. I love this. Going on faves for...well, you know why it is. =)
~*Bambam*~
2/11/2006 c1 96Bonfire Of The Sanities
Wow... I like this, very much...well done, congratulations, u have been added to another favorites list!
96Bonfire Of The SanitiesWow... I like this, very much...well done, congratulations, u have been added to another favorites list!
12/23/2005 c1 1Color It Black
Eek.
Such powerful words.
Especially the last line.
Beautiful!
PS - Evil blob!
1Color It BlackEek.
Such powerful words.
Especially the last line.
Beautiful!
PS - Evil blob!
12/18/2005 c1 18Plinky
I agree. Evil blob.
Hello! I seem to remember getting an alert for this, but don't appear to have read it. Hmm.
Curiouser and curiouser...
Beautiful poem. I see it in my head when I read it. Bear with me.
I see ... like you know when it's raining, and you look up? And you can see all the droplets falling towards you? I see that. Then on the next line, the 'camera' (Oh no, I've started. I'll never stop now.) moved back and changed angle so you can see a girl standing in like gloomy darkness on a neverending plain, looking up and crying.
Beautifulness.
Love the ending.
Gorgeous poem. So emotional. I love it.
Oh, btw, I hate barney too.
*Wanders off mumbling about conspiracies involving purple dinosaurs that sing irritating songs*
Toodles! ^-^
18PlinkyI agree. Evil blob.
Hello! I seem to remember getting an alert for this, but don't appear to have read it. Hmm.
Curiouser and curiouser...
Beautiful poem. I see it in my head when I read it. Bear with me.
I see ... like you know when it's raining, and you look up? And you can see all the droplets falling towards you? I see that. Then on the next line, the 'camera' (Oh no, I've started. I'll never stop now.) moved back and changed angle so you can see a girl standing in like gloomy darkness on a neverending plain, looking up and crying.
Beautifulness.
Love the ending.
Gorgeous poem. So emotional. I love it.
Oh, btw, I hate barney too.
*Wanders off mumbling about conspiracies involving purple dinosaurs that sing irritating songs*
Toodles! ^-^
11/22/2005 c1 19Sparks Of Steel
Awesome poem. I think you caputered so many emotions in such a little length of time. Good job!
19Sparks Of SteelAwesome poem. I think you caputered so many emotions in such a little length of time. Good job!