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2/8/2006 c1 19Pink Sparrow
oh, don't hate this poem, its really pretty. I love the last few lines. nice work.
1/10/2006 c1 14white-chokolat
hm well thanks for the inputof course i'm not black, just saying
1/8/2006 c1 1Changethesubject
simple but effective with some powerful words 'do not mourn for me' - i liked that line. nice work, keep it up.
1/4/2006 c1 124in theory
I really like every line, but the "DO not mourn for me please not for long," feels awkward. Maybe it needs a comma, or just a jazzier coat of adjectives or whatever. It just feels out of sync with the smooth grace of the other lines.
12/31/2005 c1 58White Tea and Ginger
Very simple, yet really powerful.
12/27/2005 c1 27Hidden Lies
Hmm.. you shouldn't hate this poem, it is good. Thanks for the reveiw!
11/30/2005 c1 52Lancealot
Simple yet very intreging. Back to another day I will be to review some more!
11/23/2005 c1 13KwazyKandyPie
but it's cute! the ending is great. very spiritual. -kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
11/23/2005 c1 simpleplan13
it's cute and sweet, but kinda juvenile

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