for Beyond Redemption7/30/2007 c1 
6megahama
oh wowWowWOW!
that short story was ..TOPS!
I don't think I've ever read anything so beautiful, and the twist at the edn, amde it even more exciting... man... I wish I could write as well as you!
Plus I reckon it's heaps cool how you linked it to the greek legend as you mentioned at the end.
6megahamaoh wowWowWOW!
that short story was ..TOPS!
I don't think I've ever read anything so beautiful, and the twist at the edn, amde it even more exciting... man... I wish I could write as well as you!
Plus I reckon it's heaps cool how you linked it to the greek legend as you mentioned at the end.
1/20/2007 c1 10tenna shut up
It felt real...like I was actually there watching and listening...so enchanting
Thank you...
10tenna shut upIt felt real...like I was actually there watching and listening...so enchanting
Thank you...
10/19/2006 c1 The Reader
I liked this story, and I just wanted to comment that it sounds a bit like the Phantom of the Opera - like, after Christine's happily married, she goes insane, and then the Phantom comes to her, kind of thing. I'm not accusing you of stealing it, by any means, I just find it fascinating that you based it on one story and yet another fits it perfectly. Just a comment, do with it what you will. But it was a great story, though; very moving. ;-D
I liked this story, and I just wanted to comment that it sounds a bit like the Phantom of the Opera - like, after Christine's happily married, she goes insane, and then the Phantom comes to her, kind of thing. I'm not accusing you of stealing it, by any means, I just find it fascinating that you based it on one story and yet another fits it perfectly. Just a comment, do with it what you will. But it was a great story, though; very moving. ;-D
9/15/2006 c1 7Fureiya
wow, I love it! It's something I've never read in my life. Something unqiue, omg! Good job on it Aiur! As always, your works are good! ^-^ I loved this story, and amazing how you manage to still connect with the greek myth and turn it modern version. Very deep! Loved it! Keep up the good work!
7Fureiyawow, I love it! It's something I've never read in my life. Something unqiue, omg! Good job on it Aiur! As always, your works are good! ^-^ I loved this story, and amazing how you manage to still connect with the greek myth and turn it modern version. Very deep! Loved it! Keep up the good work!
3/14/2006 c1 8bulletproof.cupid
eh, i just feel like reviewing your work for some reason. i'm always checking my email to see if i've gotten any alert. heh, i'm addicted to your writing i guess. . . i need more dark hunter. sigh. this fic was great, i reviewed it before. my thoughts haven't changed since then. it was/is brilliant and deserved to win. the description of the piano and the dust blows me away. lol, i get all happy when i realise what something means or see the metaphor for what it really it. eh, you keep me guessing. alrighty, i'm off. keep writing and update soon, kid. i'll love you for it.
~bubbl3gum
8bulletproof.cupideh, i just feel like reviewing your work for some reason. i'm always checking my email to see if i've gotten any alert. heh, i'm addicted to your writing i guess. . . i need more dark hunter. sigh. this fic was great, i reviewed it before. my thoughts haven't changed since then. it was/is brilliant and deserved to win. the description of the piano and the dust blows me away. lol, i get all happy when i realise what something means or see the metaphor for what it really it. eh, you keep me guessing. alrighty, i'm off. keep writing and update soon, kid. i'll love you for it.
~bubbl3gum
1/3/2006 c1 heavenleigh5
oh my god. that is amzaing. i am speechless. I decdied that, after a pretty long break, id return to ficpress and yuor story reminded me jsut why i ever joined in the first place. that was beautiful. pure perfection. im notsurprised you won that competition tihng. this is unbelievable. well done. it made me cry. jeez. wow.
HL xx
oh my god. that is amzaing. i am speechless. I decdied that, after a pretty long break, id return to ficpress and yuor story reminded me jsut why i ever joined in the first place. that was beautiful. pure perfection. im notsurprised you won that competition tihng. this is unbelievable. well done. it made me cry. jeez. wow.
HL xx
12/27/2005 c1 Jesslyn
Was Erich and Hersa a couple before Erich died and then Hersa went mad?
Was Erich and Hersa a couple before Erich died and then Hersa went mad?
11/29/2005 c1 48Sun Chime
Incredible. I loved the ideology, initially, when reading, I thought it to be rather cliche, but after reading through, it's easy to say the story was captivating, almost haunting in its worth. Of course, the legend, explained in the end, provided an alternate explanation to the story, but in itself, it was something well worked on. Very good. And WHERE do all you people get your hands on these fantastic legends? I have no one to tell me these stories, and don't know where to find them.
48Sun ChimeIncredible. I loved the ideology, initially, when reading, I thought it to be rather cliche, but after reading through, it's easy to say the story was captivating, almost haunting in its worth. Of course, the legend, explained in the end, provided an alternate explanation to the story, but in itself, it was something well worked on. Very good. And WHERE do all you people get your hands on these fantastic legends? I have no one to tell me these stories, and don't know where to find them.
11/28/2005 c1 liz
Oh my God. That was amazing. Your writing has never failed to blow me away, but it's still incredible to me that you can write something so powerful in three thousand words from one paragraph. This piece had a haunting feel to it; from the start I could tell something wasn't right. The ending left me speechless, and your description was SO good I nearly cried. I think you said so much in this and I want to read it over and over until I find everything. It's so deep it will probably take me hours to catch it all. I don't even understand it fully. I love how we're left wondering how insane Hersa really is and exactly how she died. You made it clear and confusing all at once. Erich and Hersa are both amazing characters. Using their names was inspired. I've never heard of that legend, but when you revealed that tie I couldn't believe what I read. It hit me really hard. I love your writing. Your style is unmatched. Please post more on this site! I miss it.
Oh my God. That was amazing. Your writing has never failed to blow me away, but it's still incredible to me that you can write something so powerful in three thousand words from one paragraph. This piece had a haunting feel to it; from the start I could tell something wasn't right. The ending left me speechless, and your description was SO good I nearly cried. I think you said so much in this and I want to read it over and over until I find everything. It's so deep it will probably take me hours to catch it all. I don't even understand it fully. I love how we're left wondering how insane Hersa really is and exactly how she died. You made it clear and confusing all at once. Erich and Hersa are both amazing characters. Using their names was inspired. I've never heard of that legend, but when you revealed that tie I couldn't believe what I read. It hit me really hard. I love your writing. Your style is unmatched. Please post more on this site! I miss it.
11/27/2005 c1 10Hell's first Icicle
woah. really beautiful, and so sad.so the end, waz it suicide? or waz he really there?
10Hell's first Iciclewoah. really beautiful, and so sad.so the end, waz it suicide? or waz he really there?
11/26/2005 c1 5the Inward Dreamer
that was intense-eerie and sad and real all at the same time-wonderful
5the Inward Dreamerthat was intense-eerie and sad and real all at the same time-wonderful