for Beyond Redemption11/25/2005 c1 
5alleluia
That was a good story. I can see why it was a winner. You didn't expect her to be in a hospital, it seemed more like a boarding school. It was just as good as your other stories. luv ya.
5alleluiaThat was a good story. I can see why it was a winner. You didn't expect her to be in a hospital, it seemed more like a boarding school. It was just as good as your other stories. luv ya.
11/25/2005 c1 7Love Eternally
Hey, great story. it's so sad. So she fell in love with a ghost. Scary.
7Love EternallyHey, great story. it's so sad. So she fell in love with a ghost. Scary.
11/24/2005 c1 6aNGeLz3xprOtOn
such a dark story. got my brain working for a while there, just thinking and understanding your story. hmm, i don't know what else to say except i like it! rock on!
6aNGeLz3xprOtOnsuch a dark story. got my brain working for a while there, just thinking and understanding your story. hmm, i don't know what else to say except i like it! rock on!
11/24/2005 c1 8Amber Hill
it's little wonder why your story won.. this is.. brilliant. it's strange, ethereal, and heartbreaking at the same time... i wish, but i can never write like you can. please don't ever stop writing..
Erich and Hersh are beautiful names. :)
8Amber Hillit's little wonder why your story won.. this is.. brilliant. it's strange, ethereal, and heartbreaking at the same time... i wish, but i can never write like you can. please don't ever stop writing..
Erich and Hersh are beautiful names. :)
11/23/2005 c1 9Ranting Forever n Rambling On
Wow, that was good. It's been a while since I've been around writing and things. Been kind of busy... Actually,I should be in bed right now, but I'm not... I'm gunna regret it tomorrow morning, but oh well. Anyway, it's the kind of melancholic story that everyone needs once in a while ^_^. And the language was so pretty, too. Anyway, I need to get to bed, but does this mean that you're going to start writing more on Fictionpress? I hope so, 'cause you're one of my ultimately favorite authors. I'm glad it won! It's great and it deserves to win. Oh, and yay for pianos. Baby grands are my favorite, personally. But they're just so expensive. It's like...the BMW or Porsche or Jaguar of pianos. That's all, I'm going to bed now ^_^. I really liked the story with the whole Erich-creepy-ghostly-evil guy. I know, he's not evil, just...um... a misunderstood genius. Yup... Okay, he's evil.
9Ranting Forever n Rambling OnWow, that was good. It's been a while since I've been around writing and things. Been kind of busy... Actually,I should be in bed right now, but I'm not... I'm gunna regret it tomorrow morning, but oh well. Anyway, it's the kind of melancholic story that everyone needs once in a while ^_^. And the language was so pretty, too. Anyway, I need to get to bed, but does this mean that you're going to start writing more on Fictionpress? I hope so, 'cause you're one of my ultimately favorite authors. I'm glad it won! It's great and it deserves to win. Oh, and yay for pianos. Baby grands are my favorite, personally. But they're just so expensive. It's like...the BMW or Porsche or Jaguar of pianos. That's all, I'm going to bed now ^_^. I really liked the story with the whole Erich-creepy-ghostly-evil guy. I know, he's not evil, just...um... a misunderstood genius. Yup... Okay, he's evil.
11/23/2005 c1 5Ookami no Yuki
Lovely and mournfully sad, to me at least. Well written, a little too smooth to be poignant, and thank you for the beautiful descriptions.
I present a two boxes of Godiva's finest chocolate to you. (If you check my profile, you'll understand)
5Ookami no YukiLovely and mournfully sad, to me at least. Well written, a little too smooth to be poignant, and thank you for the beautiful descriptions.
I present a two boxes of Godiva's finest chocolate to you. (If you check my profile, you'll understand)