for Shattered Mirror, Broken Image3/2/2008 c1 
24Glowing Aura
It's depressing, but that's what makes it a great poem. My favorute line is, "Every morning I wake, and long for you, my darling/Will I once again see your shadow, to me, ever returning?" You've portrayed your emotions beautifully and elegantly. Keep it up.
24Glowing AuraIt's depressing, but that's what makes it a great poem. My favorute line is, "Every morning I wake, and long for you, my darling/Will I once again see your shadow, to me, ever returning?" You've portrayed your emotions beautifully and elegantly. Keep it up.
7/27/2006 c1 170redsage
yep, same thing happend with me.. cant separate the freakin stanzas.. well anyway.. this poem.. so much longing and bitterness.. lost love.. how hard can it be? i like this poem.. thoughts and feeling were well expressed...
170redsageyep, same thing happend with me.. cant separate the freakin stanzas.. well anyway.. this poem.. so much longing and bitterness.. lost love.. how hard can it be? i like this poem.. thoughts and feeling were well expressed...
2/20/2006 c1 10PaintingTheSkyRed
Awe, another depressing poem. I love it. Very nice all around. Yet I think when you put DEATH in capital letters.. I think you should have used HTML to just make it bold, not all caps. Just saying. Since I am a HTML whore. Lol
10PaintingTheSkyRedAwe, another depressing poem. I love it. Very nice all around. Yet I think when you put DEATH in capital letters.. I think you should have used HTML to just make it bold, not all caps. Just saying. Since I am a HTML whore. Lol
2/19/2006 c1 44DarkPrue
I really liked this. I especially liked the last line, I thought it was very effective. Keep writing more like this. And thanks for all your reviews!
44DarkPrueI really liked this. I especially liked the last line, I thought it was very effective. Keep writing more like this. And thanks for all your reviews!
2/6/2006 c1 61Wingless Cherub
I like how this flows, but I hate how the person this poem is about is trying to change for her lover... But that's maybe just the feminist in me. This reminds of of... of... I'm blanking out just now. It's got that really Victorian- (Elizabethian? no...) feel to it. Yeats! W.B. Yeats, yeah, I think that's who/what/how this reminds me (/of). Nicely done. Flows very well (did I already say that/). My favorite line "My soul is stirred, my tears no more; and all because... you don't care anymoer". And the title is what really attracted me. Good work.
61Wingless CherubI like how this flows, but I hate how the person this poem is about is trying to change for her lover... But that's maybe just the feminist in me. This reminds of of... of... I'm blanking out just now. It's got that really Victorian- (Elizabethian? no...) feel to it. Yeats! W.B. Yeats, yeah, I think that's who/what/how this reminds me (/of). Nicely done. Flows very well (did I already say that/). My favorite line "My soul is stirred, my tears no more; and all because... you don't care anymoer". And the title is what really attracted me. Good work.
12/10/2005 c1 20Forgotten Pains
Man, those tears felt good. Thank you, that really wrenched my heart...Keep writing, I enjoy your work very much n.n
20Forgotten PainsMan, those tears felt good. Thank you, that really wrenched my heart...Keep writing, I enjoy your work very much n.n