
1/22/2006 c1
2Phillipea
Now THAT was some quality fiction! I love it! So awesome! Very suspenseful, I loved it and normally I really don't like screenplay-style stories. The only thing I would've changed was some poor spelling and too much language. But other than that I think it would make an EXCELLENT movie.

Now THAT was some quality fiction! I love it! So awesome! Very suspenseful, I loved it and normally I really don't like screenplay-style stories. The only thing I would've changed was some poor spelling and too much language. But other than that I think it would make an EXCELLENT movie.
11/25/2005 c1
56whatsapenname
well written, but unbearably unoriginal, especially the ending.
~whatsa~

well written, but unbearably unoriginal, especially the ending.
~whatsa~