
7/20/2006 c6 akaBUNKiE
aaw... sad.. but for a 9 year old kid he's forgiving.. i love his attitude.. he's so understanding! what happens to him? that's it? so it was basically about lillith and kale... uumm.. and zachary is just like a pawn to the story.. wow.. you shoulda done something.. turned the tables around and it's about zach all of a sudden.. you know..
aaw... sad.. but for a 9 year old kid he's forgiving.. i love his attitude.. he's so understanding! what happens to him? that's it? so it was basically about lillith and kale... uumm.. and zachary is just like a pawn to the story.. wow.. you shoulda done something.. turned the tables around and it's about zach all of a sudden.. you know..
12/7/2005 c5 Annie
WOW!u have a talent for writing! even if it is qiet sad, update soon!
WOW!u have a talent for writing! even if it is qiet sad, update soon!
11/30/2005 c5 iloveyoujake
sniff... snif...sniff... ur stoet is good, mate! its just so sad! but any way please upadate SOON!
sniff... snif...sniff... ur stoet is good, mate! its just so sad! but any way please upadate SOON!
11/27/2005 c4
13AngelsWillFall
that is soo sad! why did you make her die? :cry: well it was good anyway

that is soo sad! why did you make her die? :cry: well it was good anyway
11/26/2005 c4 Rebecca Knight
That sorta ruined it for me... it was so depressing...
That sorta ruined it for me... it was so depressing...
11/26/2005 c3
15Nikkole15
OMG! That is so sad! Don't let them be abusive drunks, plz! That's so sad. Aw, but I love it! Write me some more! lolz
UPDATE SOON!
~Nikkole~

OMG! That is so sad! Don't let them be abusive drunks, plz! That's so sad. Aw, but I love it! Write me some more! lolz
UPDATE SOON!
~Nikkole~
11/26/2005 c1 Lily
Interesting Story. Write More.
Interesting Story. Write More.