for The Promise In You12/5/2005 c1 jessiebell
What an amazing poem. The Humpty Dumpty reference hit home with me. I have, at times, referred to my " Humpty Dumpty heart"... and all the kings horses and all the kings men...
What an amazing poem. The Humpty Dumpty reference hit home with me. I have, at times, referred to my " Humpty Dumpty heart"... and all the kings horses and all the kings men...
11/26/2005 c1 
34Smoky Bear
i like the way it twists and turns and brings the rhymes across stanzas, i find this conveys the concept of the poem effectively.
"Did déjå vu ever control you with vertigo?" - yes indeed! :D that's a swish line.
(did you know if you double space in quickedit it gives you stanzas without having to put in markers? - you probably did so i'll butt out)
34Smoky Beari like the way it twists and turns and brings the rhymes across stanzas, i find this conveys the concept of the poem effectively.
"Did déjå vu ever control you with vertigo?" - yes indeed! :D that's a swish line.
(did you know if you double space in quickedit it gives you stanzas without having to put in markers? - you probably did so i'll butt out)