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11/26/2005 c1 12Bleachedclouds
I really like the beginning of this poem. It's, for want of a better word, emotive. But the the ending feels sort of incomplete, rushed perhaps?

Like you gave up on the orignal concept.

I do like this poem though. Good work.

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11/26/2005 c1 31A Perfect Circle
Wow. That was rather powerful. Good writing. I liked it.
11/26/2005 c1 34Smoky Bear
don't you love it when you find stuff you can't even remember writing?

this has that feel to it that it just rolled on to the page without thought, i like it.

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