for Radiance3/22/2006 c1 
173sunshineofyourlife
very nice. the main point is hidden in the words instead of written plainly. i like it. it leaves room for interpretation.
-sunshine :D
173sunshineofyourlifevery nice. the main point is hidden in the words instead of written plainly. i like it. it leaves room for interpretation.
-sunshine :D
2/7/2006 c1 Please Deactivate
'tis too bad that things such as a woman's radiant personality can fade just as the flame from a candle that has burned low in it's holder...the flame must change it's mark and we must follow if we want to be warm...
~Single Black Rose
your work is fantastic and i do hope you can continue in this fashion...use the inspiration you find around you every day
'tis too bad that things such as a woman's radiant personality can fade just as the flame from a candle that has burned low in it's holder...the flame must change it's mark and we must follow if we want to be warm...
~Single Black Rose
your work is fantastic and i do hope you can continue in this fashion...use the inspiration you find around you every day
12/3/2005 c1 a lonely september
this was beautiful. it was so detailed& i loved the ending. i havent ever read anything like it. you're amazing.
this was beautiful. it was so detailed& i loved the ending. i havent ever read anything like it. you're amazing.
11/26/2005 c1 24she's not breathing
the idea might be a little overdone, but since this entire poem revolved around it i still liked it. instead of being just one image it was the central image. and i like it, because there is the bitterness in it and a slight mockery. there's no adoration, that's for sure. and i like the "Moth" being capitalized and just the entire idea (however overdone) of those moths flitting too close and killing themselves. nice work.
~k8
24she's not breathingthe idea might be a little overdone, but since this entire poem revolved around it i still liked it. instead of being just one image it was the central image. and i like it, because there is the bitterness in it and a slight mockery. there's no adoration, that's for sure. and i like the "Moth" being capitalized and just the entire idea (however overdone) of those moths flitting too close and killing themselves. nice work.
~k8