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6/15/2003 c1 Unknowable
"the star is taken for granted" thats wonderful! I love this line.
2/12/2001 c1 Macayla Jo Adams
I really like it...especially the "But eventually everyone's star will begin to burn their fingers and they have to let it go". Great imagery.
2/10/2001 c1 14Allana
VERY deep. (sorry for the short reviews, but I'm trying to get through all 20 of these). Reminds me of "The more you tighten your grip, Tarkin, the more star-systems will slip through your fingers". The poem's kinda sad, though. Very good!
2/10/2001 c1 10elegance
Another wonderful one! You rock at Poetry!
2/10/2001 c1 142Battykat
Nice symbolism, is the star supposed to be the soul or life? or both? Whichever, another powerful piece. Thank you :)
2/10/2001 c1 19Celestial Phoenix
This is very nice. I like the message at the end.

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