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7/2/2004 c1 FrozenKiwi
Excellent! I very much enjoyed it.
8/26/2001 c1 7FyireChildesDream
very beautiful...in a way it isn't sad at all...most death that is sad is the kind where we envision no form of after life...even hell is better than non-existance.
3/27/2001 c1 4Unicraze
So sad! But it's good; there is a story going on there.
2/10/2001 c1 14Allana
Spitze! this is a kewl poem! very sad, though...
2/10/2001 c1 10elegance
I LOVE YOUR POETRY! It's so tragically wonderful!
2/10/2001 c1 15Opal Soul
It's good. The flow was good... either "I knew her once" is the most poignant line of the poem or the other interpretation suggests the complete opposite. I'll assume it's the one that pulls it all together. [You talking about yourself? Maybe my interpretation is totally wrong.]
2/10/2001 c1 142Battykat
Nice. I like the unusual take on suicide, the beauty of release rather than the waste and pain. Made me think. :)

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