for Beautiful Girl8/26/2001 c1 
7FyireChildesDream
very beautiful...in a way it isn't sad at all...most death that is sad is the kind where we envision no form of after life...even hell is better than non-existance.
7FyireChildesDreamvery beautiful...in a way it isn't sad at all...most death that is sad is the kind where we envision no form of after life...even hell is better than non-existance.
2/10/2001 c1 15Opal Soul
It's good. The flow was good... either "I knew her once" is the most poignant line of the poem or the other interpretation suggests the complete opposite. I'll assume it's the one that pulls it all together. [You talking about yourself? Maybe my interpretation is totally wrong.]
15Opal SoulIt's good. The flow was good... either "I knew her once" is the most poignant line of the poem or the other interpretation suggests the complete opposite. I'll assume it's the one that pulls it all together. [You talking about yourself? Maybe my interpretation is totally wrong.]